they are terriblely cute. I like the story but the excessive use of "amble". may I suggest a new word?
Author's Response:I'm glad you're enjoying the story. And "amble"...I like the word amble lol. And sure, you can suggest a new word. I don't see why not.
Thanks for reviewing. :)
these two are freaking magnetic. they can't stay away from each other.
Justin is super annoying. I just don't think it's going to last with Chad.
I'm glad that they did get married, but I hope that they have a nice reception later on......I love this whole story!!!I can't wait for the sequel though.
I really enjoyed reading this !!! Hope you write that sequel
Yay!!!! Sequel!!!!!
Now this was a good setup...Chad still determined, Britney is psycho...now going to UCLA. Now they are married....and JC...hmmm I think it is more then just not wanting his friend to marry but something else perhaps. Love the friendship between Beyonce, Laurie, and Kiley. I love your stories, I don't even have to read library books...just wait for your updates. They are better then 90% of the books I normally check out...actually 99% really... Haha...
Aww that was nice and cute. I really hope their family get at them on just eloping. They better push got a real wedding....eventually. Haha I can't wait for the last few chapters....and the sequel.
I love how Justin and Beyonce are so in love with each oter. I still hope thay have the big wedding instead of eloping. They are a cute and adorable couple.
Britney must really only define herself as Justin's girlfriend to lose her damn mind like that? Did she really think her ass would get the crown with Justin? She isn't with him...and trying to snatch it? Then running into and knocking over the school sign? That isn't love, that is just cray. Don't worry Chad, no one love Britney either.
The proposal was sweet, I wonder what happens with Brit...but better yet what happens in the hotel room. Haha, I can't wait for the next chapter and the impending sequel.
Have a Merry Christmas!!!
Hands down.... this was the best update ever... i loved every ounce of it... cant wait for the next... merry christmas to all, hope all of you have a joyous and glorious day..especially you shona xoxo
Oh that moment was so amazing between Justin and Beyonce. BRITNEY GO AWAY PSYCHO BITCH!!!!She really needs to gets some help even Chad stated that.
I knew he was gonna propose!!!!! I'm so happy for them. Brittney needs to put herself into a mental institution cuz she has lost her mind! I'm glad chad has moved on. Britney needs to follow him and move on.
Oh and Merry Christmas everyone! Hope you have a wonderful day with your family and friends!!
xx
Wow so much sex (I love it)....haha at Amy's outburst. I can't wait for the prom and it seems everyone knows Justin is going to propose to Beyonce there. I so can't wait...I wonder how public he will be with the proposal. Will he grab a mic on the dance floor and ask while on one knee? Or on stage as they accept their crowns for king and queen...and again on one knee? Either way everyone will see it. LOL I can't wait for an update....
Merry Christmas!!!
Ahh I love Justin and bee! I understand Amy's point of view but like they said this is her last prom, but saying that I would never spend that much on a dress (my prom dress was like £60... Bargain!!) lool
Justin and Beyonce are some horny kids. I hope Amy gets use to her new life, but it will take time. I definitely can't wait for a sequel to the story.
All I can say is...sequel, sequel, sequel!!! LOL
What a psycho Brit is, let it go!!! I doubt she loved him just pissed she wasn't the "special" one to the popular boy in school and Beyonce is. Love the affection Justin and Beyonce show for each other....so he is going to ask at prom? I have a feeling it will be verrrrrryyyyyy public proposal...I bet Brit's head will explode along with Chad dickhead. Haha!!! I can't wait for the next chapter and I hope beyond that the sequel.
When is Brit gonna understand that he doesnt want her anymore !!!!
Brit needs to be put in an institution. Justin don't want her stupid ass. She just psycho as hell. I loove Justine and Beyonce affection toward each other. Great update though.
Well, well, well look who officially turned into an asshole. I hope Beyonce and Justin take turns kicking Chad's ass. Something about not having Beyonce or losing her turns men into assholes. I can't believe he said that. Love how Amy and the fam is connecting a bit. Britney is still psycho and Liyah chose a wrong time to put on big girl panties...especially in defense of psychotic...I mean Brit-Brit. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Chad is so damn immature, lying on everyone just to get his way and then he gets pissed after he made his mistakes. Stupid :(
Justin should have hit Chad ass because he has really turned into real jerk.
Great update...I hope the family can resolve their issues.
Man all I can say is I can't wait for the next chapter. Glad Beyonce calmed down long enough to be his confident. I hope Justin, his parents, and his sister can truly sit down and figure this all out. And I know I am being selfish but I hope Amy doesn't start making the cabin her home (that is Justin and Beyonce's place)...maybe she moves in with her real parents.
This story is getting good. Justin has a twin??? I wonder if both Justin and Amy are both adopted.
WOW......his parents are definately wrong for keeping that from him and they wrong for not trying to find amy, now that they have money...I cant wait for the next update, could we get it like now please lol...I love this story!!!!
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