Good story but very unrealistic
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Okay, now I can BREATHE.....
OMG!!!! LMBO!!! Hurricane Justin coming through...My sides are aching from reading this chapter....LOL!
Author's Response:LOL :D Glad it made you laugh
Wow...I understand...Enough said.
Author's Response:It's sad that there are ppl who actually go through that :(
Awwww!....
Author's Response:LOL
great story. glad they had a healthy baby. Now maybe they can all start to heal.
Author's Response:Thank you. Glad you enjoyed the story.
loved this chapter !!! i want to see the mom's reaction to the baby just like @alex said iknow their little girl is gonna be beautiful so how can her mom denie her ?
Ok I understand being oanicked but the way that these two are acting is ridiculous and I also get why Bee wants her mom there but really after all she has done adn said, I wonder how her mom is going to act. Can't wait for more!!!
Wow I am really surprised that Justin took it that far but what did Lynn expect? First you lied to his face twice and then he finds out that you almost hurt his girlfriend and baby, he is not going to take that lying down. She/He is lucky that Bee was there to stop Justin. Can't wait for more!!!
Umm Okay.
Lynn is out of her damn mind, does she really think that Justin is not going to react to this, that he will not damn near kill her? Can't wait for more!!!
I agree with you 110 %... But what I don't like is that bey thinks she has nowhere to go without Justin, she can always go to a shelter and whatever happens to her relatives in these stories lol, where are her cousins, aunts etc... I would like for her to graduate high school, and maybe went the baby is born her mom will come around, since they were close before.
I am seriously wondering what the other thing that he is keeping from her is??? He is really acting like a child, I understand that Bee saying that he was racist was a little much but him keeping things from her is wrong. Can't wait for more!!!
What the hell is wrong with Justin??? They are together and having a baby together, yeah you should be telling her these things. What does he mean having a private life, where you ar getting your money from is not private, now if he was screwing her best friend, yeah that might not be something you want to tell her but how you are taking care of the family is one of those things. Dumb ass!!! Everything he told her makes it look like he has something to hide. Can't wait for more!!!
Wow they just hve so much going on, I wonder how does Justin pay for the apartment????
Their parents are ridiculous and they wonder why they are acting like this. For Bees mom to think that she wouldn't tell Justin what she said and then lie, please woman. Can't wait for more!!!
I agree with Justin, she can't just abort the baby because she's scared....that's what he's there for to ease her worries.
Love this story. I really hope their patents become more understanding and accept yet fact they're having a baby
Both their mums are stupid annoying and racist. I hope they change before their granddaughter comes into the world.
whoah that was very emotional... Poor bey, she doesn't need the stress. Its not for her health and the baby's. I can't wait for the next update.
Why do I get the feeling that even though Lynn will except her to keep her son around, Bee will "suddenly have a accident". Did Lynn seriously think that telling Bee this, that Bee wouldn't tell Justin. I also feel like I am on a emotional rollercoaster. One story I love Lynn and think that she is so sweet and then I read this and I just want to run over her, lol Great story though!!!!
It will better for her if she tells him the truth.
I hope she tells him the truth.
Fuck her mother she can go to hell for all I care!
Yessssssss she finally told him. I hope he doesn't react badly tho that's the last thing she's needs after the thing with her parents.
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