Brad really went crazy. I love the story. I lways hate to see it end though.

AWWW. it's over. ok loved it .great job.

Beyonce needs to be true to herself and breakup with Brad before Justin is gone. I wonder why he called her outside? Can't wait to see what happens next.

I'm glad that they are starting to be honest with themselves. Now they just need to get themselves together. Look forward to the update. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Wow these two, I know that hey were going to get caught like that but I am glad that Bee acted like she had some sense. I mean how could she not, she did the same thing. Can't wait for more!!!

They are eally living a double life and I wonder who will fine out firt.

Justin is definitely stuck between a rock and a hard place. I wonder what Beyonce's boyfriend will say too.

I really can't wait until these two get caught cause all I can see these two doing is getting mad at each other even tho both of them are lying to each other but it's gonna be a tug of war as to who the more hurt party is, can't wait!!!

Thanks for the update, Shona. They are getting very close and falling for each other. I wonder how they both are going to feel after telling the truth about their boyfriend/girlfriend in their lifes.

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NP! Sorry for the wait.

Naughty Beyonce. Girl better figure it out otherwise there's a lot of trouble headed her way. Shame on Justin.

This is so nasssty but in a good and dramatic way!!! This is how unsuspecting babies show up. Can't wait until another update.

They are sooo dirty. I can't to see more. I feel like his girlfriend may be pulling away from him already beacuse when he said that couldn't spend time with him instead of her being upset, she was just blase about it, maybe he will get an out and it will just be Beyonce who has to make her way out of a relationship. How can either of them be so comfortable doing this, it would eat me alive the guilt. Hope you update soon!!!