I like this chapter...I like the slow build of their relationship. This story could keep going from graduation, college, marriage...this story is good. I can't wait for the next update.
The was a good chapter and Britney/Chad need to get a damn life.
Good chapter
Now Justin and Beyonce are a couple...now what? Poor Chad but I never got the impression Beyonce had deep feelings for him. Even when she couldn't stand Justin and with Chad she was fighting her feelings for Justin. Justin made the one change she wanted for her. So will Justin slip up? Will Chad keep fighting or move on with Brit? Will Brit and Aaliyah continue to be an issue along with Chad? And what about their family? Will they approve of the direction Justin want to take this relationship? I am so intrigued with the next step. I can't wait for the next update.
Wow, I don't know how to feel about this. I mean I understand about Bee and Justin having feelings for each other for years and now wanting to act on it but Justin has a lot to prove whereas, Chad made a mistake and she completely shut him out. She knows all of Justin's dirt becasue he left it out there to shine but Chad gets shot down. I know you know where you are going with this story so I know it will end up ok.
I love it!!! I love it!!!! Great chapter. I can't wait until Justin and Beyonce get intimate. They are so wanting each other. Liyah and Britney are trouble.
Oh now this story is soooo good!!! I can't wait to find out what happens at the old house/cabin. I am sure it will be sweet and romantic...all I know is once they take that step it will be magical. I also think that is when Justin will fall even harder for Beyonce. He might lose his mind. Haha
Can't wait for an update!!! :)
Awww this chapter is soooo cute. I can't wait to see what happens with them next. I hope I get an update soon....I am addicted to this story. LOL
That was so cute how thaty interacted with each other. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Well at least everything is in the open. I feel for Bee. She doesn't want to trust Justin but she does feel something for him. You have me curious about what Chad wants to talk about. Nice chapter.
I don't understand Justin's motive. If he got the ring a year ago why not give it to her then? I agree with Beyonce, he is a coward. Poor Britney she is going to be devastated when she finds out about Justin and his cheating ways. Terrific chapter!
Justin is being a good boy!!! I like this Justin instead of the asshole Justin. Update again soon..
I just read the last chapter, I can't wait to see what happens once Beyonce spend the night at Justin's room. I love the changes Justin is making for her. I wonder at night will they only talk all night and just sleep in the same bed? Take a leap and be a couple? Go further and have sex? I can't wait....on one hand I want the night to be as innocent, beautiful, and pure as possible and on the other hand I would want it to be as down and nasty as possible (because you can write that really well lol)...or it can be both.
Okay just finishing reading, such a cute chapter. I love the direction...I can't wait for the next update. I can see Aaliyah and Britney will be a problem up until the very end.
That was so cute, but I have a feeeling Aaliyah and Brit are going to be trouble for J and Bee.
I love this chapter, I am looking forward to the nightly/daily update. I am re-reading the chapters to see if I knew it would lead this way. Really good story, I wonder what the next step will be for them. What will Justin do, really act like a friend? Not gawk other females while he is around her or alone or his friends? I wonder...will they just hang out? I am excited to see where this goes until graduation...maybe beyond if they go to the same college. Yes I thought that far ahead. LOL
Just saying this might be your next trilogy.
I glad they re trying to see each other halfway. Great chapter...can't wait to read more.
I feel bad for Chad becasue Britnet did do what she did but as Bee said, yes was still involved. Then on top of it, he likes her. As far as Justin, Bee might be doing this the wrong way cause of Brit but after what she did, who cares, as long as Justin treats her right.
All the drama. I love it!! Iknew Chad and Britney had did something. Beyonce needs to address her feeling for Justin.
Well he have been honest to a degree now back it up Justin....stop being a hoe, respect the women you see, be honest to the world about your feelings for Beyonce. Do that and maybe, just maybe Beyonce might give you a chance. I hope I get an update tomorrow, this story is really good.
Damn, that was good. Justin finally grew some balls. What the hell is up with Chad??/
That was good. Justin should have told her from the jump about how he really felt, instead of being a real Jerk.
Wow so Justin have real feelings for Beyonce. Had them for years...now what? Will he make an effort to change? Be that guy she liked so much as a kid? I can't wait for the next chapter. I so look forward to the emails from you that "ding" on my phone.
Well ok, Justin is not so bad but like she said he's not going to change his ways is he. Even though he has a girlfriend, he constantly cheats on her, with everyone around her, how is Bee supposed to think. Brittney is so stupid to see the engraving and think nothing of it. Also something seems off with Chad to me. Not that he is gay like Justin had been saying (or maybe he is) but something about him seems just a little off.
Justin is definitely a man whore, but he is in love Beyonce. He hasn't realize it yet., but eventually he will. Beyonce will probably be the one to break his heart and change him because he is definitely an asshole. I love this story.
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