i love it but im getting tired of justin being a punk where Lisa concern he needs to stand up to her. he needs to talk to a lawyer and beyonce needs to make him.
Author's Response:LOL yeah ur right. Good point. I might add that in a future chapter. :)
I know that with the way that Bee kinda obsesses over everything, she is not going to let this go with keeping Lynn's secret. I can't wait to see how Justin is going to handle this meeting with the teacher. Can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response:LOL, I agree. There's more to come. Randall and his cancer. William and school. And Lisa is still in the picture lol. Thanks for reviewing. Merry Christmas. Have a safe holiday!
loved it. great chapter. kids these days are mean. and for a child that young to say something like that to someone else i just shakes my head. til next time. happy writing and Merry Christmas.
Author's Response:Thank you. I know. Kids can be very harsh. I'm glad you enjoyed the update. Merry Christmas!
Those two. Great chapter and update. I'll next time.
Author's Response:Glad you enjoyed the update. Thanks for reviewing!
Yayyyyy they're finally talking!!
Author's Response:LOL, yeah. Those stubborn ppl.
Okay so I'm glad it wasn't bee but who is it then?!
Author's Response:*smiles* I can't give out that info yet. But it's nice to know you're still reading.
Finally dey are talking to each oda again. Pls no drama for a while, Let dem be happy
Author's Response:Isn't it interesting with all the drama lol. I'll try. Thx for reviewing.
I leave the site just for a little bit and come back too see so much drama in this story what the hell happened. lmaoo
Author's Response:LOL I know. They are having their moment right now. Thanks for your review.
Okay, if it wasnt Bee who the heck is it ? Lisa or the maid maybe?? Hmmm..I'm puzzled!!! But I want more...!!!!! Update again soon this mystery is getting good.
Author's Response:Thank you for your review! I will update as soon as I can.
What he hell is Bee doing??? She knows the boy is paranoid as all get up but she goes over there, especially in the middle of the night. Can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response:Ha-ha. Let's just say things ain't always what they seem. Thx for the review!
What the what!!??!! Okay this is getting weird. I hope its a body double ...yeah that's it...right? Guess we'll have to wait and see!
Author's Response:LOL I can't say. Don't want to spoil it. But thanks for reviewing.
Haha calm your tits Justin its probably just a look a like....atleast for beyonces sake if better be a look a like, cuz I will not hesitate to jump in this story and smack her
Author's Response:LOL, well till next update.
Well finally jeez, and I still don't understand Tyson relevence like seriously kill him lol
Author's Response:LOL not yet. Ha-ha.
Wow !! Way to keep the story truly interesting !
But is Bee doing what I think she's doing ?!
I always did feel something with those two .
Can't wait til next update !!!!
Author's Response:I can't say. But I will update soon. Thanks for your review.
U can't deal with bed right now I just can't. She makes me so ughhh
I am getting so tired of Bee. It's like she can't be happy if Justin is faithful, she's not happy if his ex is kissing him, this trick just can't be happy. You made the choice to marry and build a life with him and when something goes down and he owns up and tells you, you revert to an infant. I mean damn, William would have a better time acting an adult and growing the fuck up (excuse my french). For her sake, I hope that Bee is a perfect freaking angel cause if she ever did anything I would be screaming at my laptop for Justin to leave her ungrateful ass. Can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response:LOL thanks for reviewing. I will try to add another chapter today.
ok. I'm abot to make myself a character in your story and kick Beyonce but. i want to smack a chic. i'm so mad at her right now i can't get my review together. great update.
Author's Response:LOL I'm glad you enjoyed the update. Thank you!
I really hope that Bee isn't reverting back to the way things were cause it wasn't Justins fault and I hope that she realizes that. Can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response:More coming soon! Thanks for the review! :)
Oh God I hope shes not putting her wall back up. Maybe she just wants to hang out with her friends... Yep that's my excuse and sticking to it! Will was funny with that whole caterpillar thing.
Author's Response:I know! I won't say anything. Just...wait for the next update lol.
NOOOO why can't Lisa just leave it the hell alone. HE. DOESNT. LOVE. YOU!!!!! I honestly pray bee tries to understand when he tells her, I know it's gonna be hard though
Author's Response:She's a desperate psycho.
The fuck why is Tyson still here! She doesn't want you so moveeeee on. He's like a rash that just keeps coming back no matter how much you treat it :p loool
Author's Response:Well put! LOL
I think this was supposed to make us feel sorry for Lisa but her feelings are irrelevant to me lool no but on a serious note I'm glad she came back.
Author's Response:HAHA!
I glad Justin and bet finally made up, can't believe will walked in on them again...dreading that talk when I eventually have kids lool
Author's Response:You're so late! LOL but thanks for reviewing. You always review! Love it! :)
awsome update ! I understand where Bee's hurt is coming from, she has to put up with another who won't go away and try to trust justin in the process maybe she just needs a shoulder to lean on ?
Author's Response:Well I will make sure that shoulder isn't Tyson's lol. Thx for the review!
OK come on B don't make me slap u Chica. He was honest with you about everything. Don't let that girl ruin your marriage. You have got to trust your hubby and quit using his past as an excuse to not trust him. Justin should have her come to the house to visit and have Ginger supervise and he go somewhere else while she visiting because she don't get that you don't want her. As for Tyson well I'm not even going to start on this fool. I'm likely to be here all night. Great update. Til later.
Author's Response:Thank you for the review. Yes, Bee is being very emotional and irrational. Things will come around.
Most Recent |
Random Story |
Featured Stories |
Picture Perfect by Black Coffee Rated R Three years later. Sequel to In The Eye Of The Storm. Things may seem picture... |
We Belong Together by Black Coffee Rated NC-17 Three months pregnant and alone. Beyonce finds love through her best friend... |
Love Sex and Magic by Black Coffee Rated R After being exposed for being a "racist" Justin Timberlake tries to disprove... LOVESOUNDS by Black Coffee Rated NC-17 Air head Justin Timberlake doesn't have a clue when it comes to women. He... Ordinary Girl by Black Coffee Rated R A popular foot ball player develops a bond with an ordinary African American... Black and White by Black Coffee Rated R How far will you go to get the person you're crazy for attention? Justin Timberlake... A New Chapter by Black Coffee Rated R Trilogy to Cheerleaders and Jocks: Kristen Bell HiGH ScHooL. TEN YEARS LATER This Too Shall Pass by Black Coffee Rated R After a tragedy that ended his fiancee's life, Justin is left alone to take... YONCÉ in LOVE by Black Coffee Rated NC-17 In the life of Beyonce Knowles and Justin Timberlake. Their romantic, steamy... The Parkers by Black Coffee Rated R Going undercover as a married couple can be a disater if the person you are... Wildest Dreams by Black Coffee Rated R Janice never thought in her wildest dreams that she would ever meet Justin... shattered.erotica. by Black Coffee Rated NC-17 Justin on tour with *N Sync. After finding out that his girlfriend Shakara... Not So Simple by Black Coffee Rated R Prequel to UNFAITHFUL. Before the marriage scandal and Lovechild, Beyoncé... PusherLoveGirl by Black Coffee Rated R Sequel to Forbidden Fruit. Takes place eighteen months later. Things are even... Erotica: In The Mind Of A Recovering Addict by Black Coffee Rated NC-17 Justin Timberlake is a engineering director at PlusOne. All day... For Better Or For Worse by Black Coffee Rated R A one night stand turns into something more in this romantic, love story. ... |