Okay firstly words cannot describe how much I love this story!! And I'm glad it's a really long one as well. Now onto the update I'm so mad at Lisa like what the hell was she thinking getting her innocent daughter involved with her BS, all I know is whoever is chasing her better not go after jules! I will have none of that. And I agree with bee, although Justin should help, Lisa needs to want the help otherwise it's just gonna be wasted effort and money. Can't wait to see what happens next tho :)
Author's Response:Thank you! This story wasn't planned to be so long but I felt like there could be more to it. And trying to keep ppl interested is a challenge so I'm glad you're still enjoying it. :D
Lisa is out of her mind. She really did need the help. Really good update to see the pain on both sides. Lisa is hurt and feeling rejected, she gotta get over it for her baby. This is such a page turner, is this your longest story?
Author's Response:She is out of her mind and in real life there are ppl who are just like her. Who can't move on and are willing to throw their lives away for someone. And yes, this is my longest story thus far. Glad you're still enjoying it.
Lisa needs to be dropped off the side of a cliff. She bugs the hell out of me. Justin leave that hood rat alone. Jules is better off with her out of her life. According to Jules ma ma is Beyonce. Loved the update.
Author's Response:LOL you make me laugh. You have a point but this isn't the end of the story yet :) Thanks for reviewing.
Aww man poor jules I really need Lisa to get help now for her sake.
Author's Response:I know. It's really sad that an innocent child has to be put in the middle of it.
Great update ! Every time I read this I wish that he would've never slept with that girl. i know he feels guilty for it, getting her pregnant like that I wish he gets his we'll deserved stress free moment !
Author's Response:Hopefully he will because she's a nut case. Poking holes in condoms and doing drugs lol.
LOVE THIS! I have been reading this for the pass couple of days in between doing homework. It's amazing! I love how natural both of these characters are. I like how they don't depict marriage as a happy fairytale, cause it's not. Marriage can be very hard and extremely stressful but blissfully amazing all in one. I love your writing. I am hooked! You go girl. Can't wait to read what's going to happen with Lisa. If Justin is going to get full custody of Juliette. If Randall is going to be ok. And if the feud with Tyson is really over. Just had to tell you that I love this story one more time. :O)
Author's Response:You're too kind. I'm really glad you love the story. I've been contemplated on whether to end it but ppl were still enjoying it. It's one of my longest stories thus far. I will keep updating when I get a chance. Thank you kindly.
Haha Justin is crazy!! I love beystin so much man. I hope Alfonso doesn't cause anymore problems with them. And I agree with bee Justin should go to court and get full custody of julliette because Lisa isn't in the right mind too look after her.
Author's Response:Yeppers. I love them too. Wish they were together for real.
This was a good and calm chapter. I no drama is coming... Lol
Author's Response:Lol this story is supposed to be about love and joy but it always turns out to be more than that lol.
Justin showed his ass. Whoo and he needed to. That girl is crazy. He need to get a lawyer because Lisa ass is crazy. I thought Bee was about to get her but Justin had Bee backing the hell up. I think he was 2 seconds from choking that chick. I was like "get her Justin ...get that crack head" wrong I know but Lisa gets on my nerves. Rant over. Nice update
Author's Response:Lmao I know. Bee was at a point where she was going to say something but justin interfered. Glad u enjoyed the update
Well damn, that was crazy!!
Author's Response:That's why I called the chapter THE HULK lol. He went hulk on her ass lol.
ok thats it. its time to bann this B***h from the house. Once you steal from me we r done. From Now on if she wants to see juliette it needs to be supervised public place. Its time for Lisa to be gone. Justin should have took his but straight to a lawyer and filed for full custody and termination of her parental rights. That baby could have got hold of that stuff and Od. Justin is to soft where she concern make me want to smack him sometime. ok done ranting. loved the update.
Author's Response:LOL ur funny but you're absolutely right. He is very soft. We will see what happens next! :)
Let me pray for Lisa because she needs the father, the son and the Holy Spirit!!
Author's Response:LMAO!! I know, right?! LOL
Lisa is a hot mess..
Author's Response:I concur! LOL
I can not believe Lisa became a drug addict. She is so lucky justin didn't completely snap on her, having the drugs out in the open while she slept. The baby crawling around crying. He handle that very well. Can't wait to see the next update. I no she will be back causing more drama
Author's Response:Lol yes she is something else. I will try to update this story this week. Tonight when I get off work I'm gonna update killing me softly. Be on the look out! :)
I knew Lisa was doing some crazy and stupid, Justin needs to take her to court ASAP!!
Author's Response:I concur! LOL
Man Lisa is irking my damn nerves like what is she hiding that she needs to much money!! I thought you were gonna say he's dad died. I'd rather him in a coma than that.
Author's Response:LOL sad but yeah. And ur right, she's hiding something.
Well I'm glad Justin knows now, not to be all negative or what not but they just need to spend as much time with Randall as possible.
I don't think Lynn should have asked bee to keep that secret, like that nothing small its huge; and when Justin finds out she knew he's gonna be pissed. Kids these days are so mean!
Loool bee and Lynn are too funny. I don't trust ty, I smell BS!!!
Aww that was so cute, and erm I'm sorry about what happened to sue Elle but I don't trust her. Maybe I'm just being paranoid lol
Author's Response:Lol maybe. Maybe not.
I loved this chapter a lot. But me and B differ on how to handle Lisa in that situation. I personally would have put on my hood rat ass whipping clothes . Me and her would have boxed. Because she more of a mama than Lisa. Oh by the way that outfit consists of a t-shirt,blue jeans, tennis shoes and Vaseline on my face. Oh and hair in a ball on my head. Lol thanks for the update sweetie.
I'm trying to stay up with my reviews but school is killing me.
Author's Response:It's okay. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I personally think I would've handed the situation different too. :D Till next time.
I am still enjoying this stroy but I am so suprised that it has continued this far. I can't believe the nerve of Lisa, she is going to get caught so I can't wait to see that drama!!!
Author's Response:I'm glad you're still interested. Haven't heard from you in awhile. Hope all is well! :)
YEP YEP YEP!!!
Author's Response:LOL :) Thank you.
Yes.....still lovin this story. Poor Justin has a lot on his plate. A dying father and a crack head baby momma! Least him and Bee are happy!
Author's Response:Lmao yes I know. It's sad. Thank you for your review.
Love this story!!
Author's Response:Thank you. Glad to know ppl r still enjoying it.
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