And the plot thickens. I wonder what the coordinates are needed for. I hope that Bey can find out some more about the Cubans. Thanks for bringing this story back
Author's Response:Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the update. More soon! :)
Great update!
Author's Response:Thanks a bunch! :D
Wow, he was sick for doing that to her. Justin needs to be careful with being intimate with these women that he is investigating, I hope that does not backfire on him. I agree with Justin about his new/temporary partner though, she is doing the most for unjustifiable reasons. She has known from day one that he loves Bey and she is still trying to slide in her space. (rolls eyes)
This was a nice update and I look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response::D Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Nice to see you on here again!
Look forward to writing more and reading your reviews. Thank you!
I'm confuse, i get that she is undercover and all. but why would she stay to get rape. i don't care what can of a case she is working.
Author's Response:She has to play the part in order to extract the info she needs. Once she gets that, things will be different. She can take care of herself and she could've escaped but she's still on a mission. She's also been in training for torture and all in case she ended up in a situation like that. I heard about a story a long time ago where a man was undercover, I don't remember if he was in a mob or something and he befriended these ppl for years until he got what he wanted and the rest is history.
Thanks for reading the story!
I'm so furious the captain hasn't told Justin Beyonce's alive yet. Harold is a bastard. Poor Beyonce. Hopefully, she can get whatever information she needs and get out of there alive. Justin shouldn't have had sex with that woman. I think its risk of getting his cover blown. Can't wait until the next chapter. Good story so far.
Author's Response:Yeah, it is messed up what the Captain has done. Beyonce is in a bad place right now and hopefully it will end with Harold being caught and her returning to Justin. Justin is a very interesting character lol. We'll see how next update goes. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Glad you like so far.
Thanks for the up date keep it up
Author's Response:You're welcome. Thanks for reviewing.
The cheif knows she's alive?! And Justin doesn't know! That's cold. So glad The Parkers got a sequel. 😃
Author's Response:It is F'd up. More drama coming soon. Glad you like so far!
Thank you
Oh snap....twist!!
Author's Response:Lmao :D
Glad you're enjoying so far. Thank you!
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!! I can't believe Beyonce has been undercover this whole time. Why won't the chief tell Justin? When Justin finds out she's undercover, there is going to be hell to pay. Justin has been crying and has been obsessed over finding Beyonce, and all this time the chief knows she's alive. PLEASEEEEEE update soon.
Author's Response:LOL there's so much more to come. So glad you're enjoying so far. Thank you for reviewing.
ok dont tell me that was Bee.
Author's Response:Haha I won't say anything. Till next update. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Great update! I can't believe she was undercover this whole time I'm still chocked! Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:Thank you. So glad you enjoyed the update. More coming soon.
The chief is a dog and a half for doing Justin like that...SMH! I see that Melissa is still dry from thirst. She's so d-r-y (In my Sondra from 227 voice). I'm glad that Justin is not falling for her transparent attempts to get next to him. Beyonce plays her role well but I'm sure Harold is equally cunning. Love this and thank you for the update!
Author's Response:I know. Ryan will get his. More coming soon. Glad you're enjoying so far. Thank you for reviewing.
You mean this whole time she was undercover...mind blown. Thanks for updating!
Author's Response:LOL more coming soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
She's undercover! I thought she quit? That bastard knows she's alive and can't give justin the peace of mind ? Aghh, Harold and Bee I wanna see where this relationship goes how is she gonna break that off ? Great update
Author's Response:LOL till next time. More coming soon. Thank you for reviewing.
Thank you for the update
Author's Response:You're welcome. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
THANK YOU FOR THIS SEQUEL!!!!! Poor JT, I know he is almost out of his mind. Melissa is all ready nerve wrecking. She has wasted no time in pulling the "Lay your head on my shoulders, let me comfort you" routine. I mean, really? I hope JT sets her straight if she keeps it up. Harold is NOT playing! I hope Bee can push through enough to plot a way out or hold on until help arrives, whichever comes first. I can't WAIT for the next chapter!
Author's Response:You're welcome, girly! And it's a good thing Harold has feelings for her, otherwise it would've been worse. Beyonce is a survivor and she will pull through. Justin is good at his job so he will find her.
Any hoo, thanks so much for reading and reviewing. More coming soon!
i did not like beyonce getting abuse and raped, that was hard to read.
Author's Response:Well I'm glad I was descriptive enough to make it believable lol. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Justin is on the verge of an emotional breakdown. Beyonce is one touch from cracking up and being shipped to the loony bin.Although with you Beyonce could be faking..hmmm. Then we have miss imma hoe even in front of my husband. Let us not forget we have miss I am your partner and I wanna have sex with you even though I know you are in love with another woman who was kidnapped and your last partner and you looking for her but I don't care at all I just want you.I see what you trying to do. You are trying to have me crazy like beyonce. Haha nice start
Author's Response:LOL just know that things ain't always what they seem. Lmao you're too funny. Reading your reviews always make me laugh haha. Any way, being in the CIA...they train you for situations like this. So....that's all I will say for now.
Glad you enjoyed the chapter. More coming soon. Thank you!
So Harold ordered to take her but her brother kept up with her? And i hope they clean her up and start to treat her better, God I can't imagine her pain but being in the CIA I know they prepare for that kind of torture. Thank god for her and Harold catching feelings during the mission and poor justin!
Author's Response:Oh you'll be surprised how manipulative Beyonce can be *hint* *hint* But yes that's what it seems like for now. Harold didn't have the heart to torture her BUT make the orders. Justin......
:( They will hopefully reunite soon. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Awww Bee. Awww Justin....please give him a sign...can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for the sequel!
Author's Response:I know :( and you're welcome. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
OHHH....I like this one already. Great start!
Author's Response:Thank you so much. Glad you like so far! More coming soon.
OMG A SEQUEL! I absolutely loved the story and now there's a Sequel! Oh I love you :D ! So it's reall sweet how Justin misses her but he has to remain strong hopefully he finds a clue even if it's a small one. One thing that surprises me is that Beyonce has been missing,beaten, and tortured with her MIA background an all but I guess a person can only take so much specially after months of it but she's strong I know she will make it. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
Author's Response:It wasn't planned. I was just on the computer and decided to write it. That's how I get ideas. They just pop up out of nowhere lol. There are suprises and a lot of drama coming up. I hope I keep you interested!
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Wow a wonderful start to the story
Author's Response:Thank you! Appreciate it. :)
AWWWWWWWWW!!!! I feel so bad for Justin and Beyonce. I didn't expect for Beyonce to be beat, raped, and tortured. I'm surprised. Hopefully Harold won't let that happen to her anymore. I also didn't expect for Justin to go undercover so soon since he hasn't found her, but it's his job so I get it. We already know he's madly in love with her, and is also suffering. So sad. Of course, Melissa has a thing for him. He's Justin Timberlake after all. Hopefully, he finds Beyonce so they can be reunited. PLEASEEEEEEEE updat soon.
Author's Response:LOL yes it's sad. He still has to keep working but he won't let that stop him from finding her. Of course Melissa has a thing for JT. I HAVE A THING FOR JT! LOL. Glad you enjoyed. More coming soon. Thank you.
OMG!!! Please write a sequel!
Author's Response::DD Thinking about it. Just keep a look out!
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