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Name: jomoli (Signed) · Date: Dec 31, 2014 5:59 AM · For: The Truth

Great update



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)



Name: imaginations_22 (Signed) · Date: Dec 29, 2014 4:36 PM · For: The Truth

I knew from the flashback Justin liked bey I was just waiting for that moment! Didn't expect it to happen the way it did though lol. Too bad he didn't finish telling her how he felt she might of responded back with something positive. Oh well can't rush it, thanks for the update! 



Author's Response:

LOL that's right. Patience my friend lol. I've had so many ideas on how and when he should tell her. Sometimes it comes out the way I imagined and others, it just ends up differently. Don't know why. But any way, there's more coming. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Glad you're enjoying so far.



Name: danny (Signed) · Date: Dec 29, 2014 3:20 AM · For: The Truth

Thanks for the up date I hope beyonce does change I would love to see the reaction in their  school



Author's Response:

You're very welcome. So glad you enjoyed. More coming soon!



Name: sammy18 (Signed) · Date: Dec 29, 2014 3:04 AM · For: The Truth
Thank you for the update, i loved it, and i can't wait to read more!!

Author's Response:

You're so welcome. Thank you for reading and reviewing.



Name: sered (Signed) · Date: Dec 28, 2014 8:28 PM · For: The Truth

I knew justin had feelings for bey. I really can't wait for the make over, I think Monique will regret nominating her. I just can't wait to see everyone's reaction to her new look.Looking forward to the next update.



Author's Response:

LOL well I'm pretty sure you saw the "sneak peek" of the makeover. I'm still having thoughts on whether she will debut it in person. I won't go into detail but we'll see. :)

Glad you're njoying so far. Thanks for reading and reviewing.



Name: sered (Signed) · Date: Dec 28, 2014 5:28 PM · For: Bits and Pieces

Great update, I love the flashbacks, it really does explain a lot of things. I know it will take a while for Bey to trust justin again. I still think he is s jerk. Monique is clearly threatened by Bey. Please update soon, this story has great potential.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Glad you enjoy the flashbacks. I thought it would be interesting explaining what happened between them. And I agree, Mo is threatened by Bee. Why wouldn't she be? LOL Really appreciate your reviews and so glad you enjoy the story so far. More to come.

Oh and Happy New Year!



Name: sammy18 (Signed) · Date: Dec 28, 2014 1:13 PM · For: Bits and Pieces

Update please!!



Author's Response:

You got it! LOL :)



Name: imaginations_22 (Signed) · Date: Dec 28, 2014 7:58 AM · For: Bits and Pieces

I don't really see why he thinks Beyonce has a problem besides not really being confortable with sex and dressing to cover up, I don't find that odd at all. Now her father is really pushy and I can't believe he was upset that a boy was on the phone. I think he's probably scared she might loose her virginity and get with what he thinks is the wrong guy but at one point he has to step out of her way and let her be her. Thanks for the update! 



Author's Response:

Kids, teenagers these days. If you're not in the IN crowd then you're being odd when in reality, it's not odd. You're just being yourself. It's sad. And Matthew is overprotective which is very annoying and unnecessary.

So glad you enjoyed the update. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Happy New Year!



Name: danny (Signed) · Date: Dec 28, 2014 2:41 AM · For: Bits and Pieces

Thanks for the up date I hope they become friends again or more 



Author's Response:

You're welcome. Thanks for the read and review. :)



Name: ajelise10 (Signed) · Date: Dec 28, 2014 1:45 AM · For: Bits and Pieces

I see why Justin was annoyed with Matthew. I hate when people try to make you do something you don't want to do. It's nothing wrong with being Christian or worshipping the lord, but I hate it when people try to force that on other people. Kind of agreeing with Justin about seeing why Beyonce could be the way she is even though it's NOTHING wrong with her. Sad her dog died, and that ended their friendship. She shouldn't have blamed Justin because it wasn't his fault. Even though Justin's a jackass, hopefully he can change. Can't wait until the next chapter.



Author's Response:

LOL I know, right? I hate it too! Hopefully things will get better between them. We'll see. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing and Happy New Year!



Name: ajelise10 (Signed) · Date: Dec 14, 2014 10:31 PM · For: THAT subject

I feel soooooooo bad for Beyonce. I don't give a Fuck if she was a virgin until she was 50, if she dressed like Elvis Presley, was a lesbian, or if she believed in aliens. You don't be a bully or be a bitch ass little boy or girl, and pick on her. Now she has to be around the douche for the rest of her life because their parents are marrying. I hope Beyonce beats the people who pick on her up. She is seriously going to snap one day and something serious night happen. 



Author's Response:

LOL sadly to say but there are ppl out there. If you're not with the IN crowd then you're a loser unfortunately. Hopefully they don't marry *shrugs shoulders*

Any way, thanks for reading and reviewing. More coming soon!



Name: sered (Signed) · Date: Dec 10, 2014 12:13 AM · For: THAT subject

Great update. For someone who claims to hate Bey, justin is giving her a lot of his time. I'm happy be is sticking up for herself against him, his taunting is too much.



Author's Response:

Haha I think it's more of a love/hate kinda thing. Maybe there's a reason for his behavior? Any way, glad you enjoyed. More coming soon and thanks for the review.



Name: KayJayT (Signed) · Date: Dec 09, 2014 5:58 PM · For: THAT subject

He is such a jerk, but Bee needs to losen up alittle. Although he would have gotten slapped a few times..lol to funny tho



Author's Response:

IKR! and he probably would've got more than a slap lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing. More coming soon.



Name: imaginations_22 (Signed) · Date: Dec 08, 2014 11:32 PM · For: THAT subject

Thanks for the update! Justin still makes me upset he needs to grow up. I wonder what happened between the two that made them both change.



Author's Response:

Time maybe. Bad influences. We shall see. Thanks for reading and reviewing.



Name: lucky (Signed) · Date: Dec 08, 2014 9:34 PM · For: THAT subject

great chapter, cant wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed!



Name: alee92 (Signed) · Date: Dec 08, 2014 8:01 PM · For: THAT subject

Lol I'm so ready for them to kiss!!!! They have SO much chemistry!



Author's Response:

Haha. A love/hate relationship lol. More coming soon. Thanks for reviewing.



Name: alee92 (Signed) · Date: Nov 12, 2014 2:06 AM · For: Virgin Mary

What in the hell? OMG Justin is a straight up fool. Lmao "touch it". He's so wrong for that. Thanks for the update and I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

LOL I couldn't agree more. He is a fool. More coming soon. Thanks for reviewing.



Name: mia (Signed) · Date: Nov 12, 2014 1:28 AM · For: Virgin Mary

man ! this angst is really getting to me! Like i wish bee grows the fuck up. I mean how does she expect to make it in college? I want her to do a 360 before the school year is over and i want justin to NEED her! but she becomes popular and doesnt need him, but still lingers on him ! that'd be great! lol loved the update!



Author's Response:

LOL lmao she will change. For the good. You know there's plenty more to come. Karma's a bitch lol. Remember she's odd girl for a reason haha. Thanks for reviewing.



Name: sered (Signed) · Date: Nov 11, 2014 3:59 PM · For: Virgin Mary

Great update, justin is a jerk. I really can't wait for the day when he will be grovelling to be, I hope she ignores him. i really hope she finds happiness, unfortunately college is a breeding ground for ignorant people. I can't wait to see where you take this story.



Author's Response:

I know. He is! And when that day comes I bet you'll be laughing. More coming soon. Thanks for the review



Name: danny (Signed) · Date: Nov 11, 2014 6:15 AM · For: Virgin Mary

Thank you for the update 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)



Name: ajelise10 (Signed) · Date: Nov 11, 2014 1:55 AM · For: Virgin Mary

This is so sad. Don't call me a punk, but I'm kind of emotional. Who treats people like that? PLEASEEEEEE update soon. 



Author's Response:

LOL I won't call you a punk but believe it or not, there are ppl like that unfortunately. Glad you enjoyed. Thanks a bunch.



Name: Coffee K (Signed) · Date: Nov 10, 2014 9:22 PM · For: Virgin Mary
So glad that she slapped him...I was a tomboy in school so I would have tried to knock him out fot pulling a stunt like that, jerk! LOL at the comment about the Titanic theme song, it made me have flashbacks about too many people, singing it off-key. I wish Bey would get over her father being with Lynn. I never understood when young adults would get upset over their single parent dating, unless they were being abused. Anyway, I enjoyed the update and look forward to the next chapter. Thank you!

Author's Response:

LOL I was a tomboy too. Still is so I agree. And I've seen it. Kids being upset about their parents being with diff ppl but I was never that type. I like the titanic song. I heard it on my first cruise which was funny lol. Any way, glad you enjoyed. Thanks for the review.



Name: imaginations_22 (Signed) · Date: Nov 10, 2014 9:17 PM · For: Virgin Mary

Justin really pushes my buttons! Please update soon though! 



Author's Response:

LOL that's the whole idea!! :D More coming soon. Thanks for reviewing.



Name: lucky (Signed) · Date: Nov 10, 2014 7:59 PM · For: Virgin Mary

i love this story, update soon. cant wait to read how Bee changes.



Author's Response:

Thank you. Glad you're enjoying it. :) More coming soon!



Name: alee92 (Signed) · Date: Sep 18, 2014 8:14 AM · For: Something Dreadful

Well damn! Hahaha everyone knows he can't handle a woman crying...that's perfect. Can't wait for more! 



Author's Response:

BUT he doesn't mind acting like an ass lol. Glad you enjoyed the update. Thanks for reviewing!



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