I can't wait for the first kiss. I hope she goes to the dance and dances with Justin. Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:We'll see what happens next! It might be magical. Might be dramatic. Or might be both lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
About time Justin started to stand up for her. We will have to see if it last. love the story.Great update
Author's Response:LOL I know. Thank you for reading and reviewing :)
FINALLLLLLLY JUSTIN DEFENDS HER!!! I'm so happy he defended her. I think Amy is not going to be his girlfriend for long. That little bitch. I liked Monique better than her(even though I hate Monique ass). Beyonce should've slapped Amy. Can't wait until the next chapter.
Author's Response:Haha well Beyonce is still that scared girl but she'll probably come out of that shell eventually. More coming soon and thanks for reading and reviewing!
Great update, I cant wait until the dance. I really want Bey to start dating, maybe that will be the tipping point that changes justin completely.
Author's Response:LOL never know. But things are changing :)
Glad you enjoyed the update. More coming soon!
Awww yay Justin! About damn time he did something. Can't wait for the next update, thanks!
Author's Response:IKR! Glad you enjoyed the update. More coming soon. Thank you!
Okay, just a second (TAKING A DEEP BREATHE TO CALM DOWN) I WISHED another girl would have done that to me because I would have shown her EVERY INCH of that school, JS! Bey should have snapped and mopped her. As for JT, about time! Too bad it was a girl he stood up to instead of one of his jerk friends. Thank you for anothe update, you know how to keep me hook. I think I need rehab (In my Rihanna singing voice).
Author's Response:LOL maybe that will be next. And this is a good sign. Hopefully things turn out for the best for him and Bee. And with the dance coming up, who knows what will happen next :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
I don't know why but that ending made me feel good! I'm happy he did what he did it actually was ticking me off what Amy was doing.
Author's Response:Haha well things are slowly changing. We'll see what happens next!
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Thanks for the update
Author's Response:You're welcome. Thanks for the read and review
Oh god, i'm dead!!
Thank you for the update, i cant wait for more!
Author's Response:LOL you're welcome. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
I am so in love with this story. cant wait for the next update great job
Author's Response:Well thank you! So glad you're enjoying it. More coming soon :)
I'm back..haha. The holidays are over my husband went back to work this evening(he was down with a case of the flu)..and real life has slowed down. i can read and review now. okay im behind on my reviews but i have to say i'm loving this story. When i first started the story i wasn't quite sure where you was going because i frankly wanted to maim Justin. But it seems as if things are slowing turning although, i"m sure the drama is not over however we can see a little light. Amy is cray cray. Something is not right with that child.great updates and sorry so late.
Author's Response:It's okay. How was your holiday?
I'm glad you gave the story a chance. Hope you enjoyed the update. More coming soon. Thank you so much!
I love this story! Yea Justin! Now I'm just waiting on Bee to become hot!
Author's Response:LOL I'm sure Bee makes a hot nerd lol.
Glad you enjoyed. More coming soon!
LOL at him tripping Daryl. That's what he gets for trying to make Beyonce fall on her face. For Beyonce to truly think Justin is trying to be her friend again, he needs to stop trying to make the friendship secret. He needs to tell his friends to stop teasing her, and stop acting like a spy going on secret missions with the sneaking her into classrooms and closets. I really want to know why Beyonce doesn't want a boyfriend and why she's so scared of boys. I'm a 16 year old virgin, so her being a virgin doesn't bother me. PLEASEEEEEEEE update soon.
Author's Response:I agree with everything you said and he's gonna learn the hard way. Time will reveal :)
I remember when I was sixteen. Seems like yesterday lol. Any way, thanks for reading and reviewing. More coming soon!
Lol oh goodness. I'm starting to dislike them both. Bee because her act is starting to get old and Justin because he needs to man up already. Thanks for the update and I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:Haha right on point. I agree. Maybe if they just get over their past and move on, things would be different.
Any way, thanks for reading and reviewing. More coming soon.
Liking this story
Author's Response:I'm thrilled you're enjoying it so far. Thank you!
But it was going so well for like three or four days lol right now Im curious to why Beyoncé is the way she is. Is it really just her father or something else? I know this is off topic but you are really spoiling us with the Odd Girl Out updates lol I love it!!!
Author's Response:It was going well and we all know that they will be talking again. I think their past is interfering. So they're having a hard time getting past it. As far as Beyonce goes...can't really say much right now. There could be more to it or not.
And I really appreciate your interest in the story. Glad you're enjoying the updates. More coming soon!
Thank you so much for keeping these stories updated! Please continue to write more stories I love them so much!!
Wow! Thanks for all of the updates! Justin is still something else! He keeps telling Bey what she needs to do and stop doing when he should follow his own advice and get a backbone, himself.
Author's Response:Lmao I know! Hypocrite, huh? LOL And you're welcome. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Appreciate it.
Great update. Justin is giving me whiplash, he must be confusing the hell out of Bey. I really want Bey to find someone, even if it's just another friend, Ashley can't be her only one. Bey should ignore Justin until he stops leading a double life. I still think she should defend herself more, she has let these bullies control too much of her life.
Author's Response:I agree. He's confused. And hopefully Bee gets out of that faze and meet other ppl. She needs to be more social and maybe it'll happen eventually. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Thanks for the update
Author's Response:Thank you for reading and reviewing!
I see the “change” is going to take awhile lol a makeover would of been too easy to change her mind when it comes to dressing and being herself but it was a nice try. I knew Justin's girlfriend would take it hard but I didn't think she would try this hard, then again she did love him I guess. I Love all the updates! :)
Author's Response:Yep lol. It'll take more for Beyonce to change a little. I think Justin will play a major part in that. Once he stops caring about what ppl will think and does what he really feels from the heart, things will most likely change.
So glad you're enjoying the story. More coming soon. Thank you!
Oh sweet jesus, i need more,please!
Author's Response:LOL more coming soon. Glad you're enjoying so far! Thank you.
Great updates! Can't wait for the next few!
Author's Response:Thank you so much! Appreciate it. More coming soon!
Dude I seriously can't ! Why doesn't she except the wardrobe ! Who wouldn't plus she's Beyonce so I know she looked hot lol
Author's Response:LOL I guess she's just not used to it. She's not an attention seeker so it makes her umcomfortable. Hopefully Justin will turn that all around lol.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
I knew everyone woulld love Beys makeover. Justin should be happy is is reluctant to wear certain stuff, I'm sure if she did his friends would be chasing her. I still want Bey to continue to build her confidence, justin is giving out too many mixed signals. Monique is too desperate, I'm happy Bey respects herself. You love to end your updates with cliffhangers, it leaves you wanting more.
Author's Response:Justin knows how he really feels. He just doesn't know what to do. I think it's because of his status. Peer pressure. But he'll hopefully realize what's important sooner or later. And about cliffhangers...lol. I try to avoid them but sometimes it's hard to. It's tempting and it's a nice feeling knowing that the readers are anxious to read more :)
Any way, glad you enjoyed the update. Thanks so much!
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