OMG!!! Please write a sequel!
Author's Response::DD Thinking about it. Just keep a look out!
What....wait....it can't end here!! We need more...
Thank you for sharing your amazing writing talents with us. This story is wonderful.
Author's Response:LOL :( You're welcome. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed the story! Still deciding on a sequel or not. Thanks again!
Amazing story, great ending. but i hope you do a sequel, i would love to know what happen to beyonce.
Author's Response:Thank you! And I will think about it. Glad you enjoyed the story. :D
WRITE A SEQUEL PLEEEAAAAAAASSSEE!!!!! This story is too too too good to be left like this. Please write a sequel..
Author's Response:LOL I'm definitely thinking about it. I didn't think anyone would enjoy the story this much :) I appreciate your review. Thanks a bunch.
I agree with Coffee K! Please!!! I want to know who was the so called doctor!
Author's Response:I'm thinking about it. :) But I'm glad you enjoyed. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Awwman ! I wanna know what happens with Bee and who that guy was! But is was a good update!
Author's Response::( A cliffhanger. Sorry to do it lol. I wanted it to be exciting from start to end. But I am thinking about a sequel so we'll see...
Glad you enjoyed. Thanks so much
WHAT????!!!! NO!!!!!! you have no idea how on the edge of my seat I was...Write a sequel...PLEASE!!!!!
Author's Response:LOL I figured it had to come to an end since they weren't undercover as The Parkers anymore :( but I am definitely thinking about a sequel. Glad you enjoyed. Thank you!
Thank you for the up date
Author's Response:You're welcome. Thank you for reading and reviewing
Bee is right I don't think he'd give up his brother without having something waiting for him. They're not that stupid. I'm glad bee finally told the chief what's going on with them.
Author's Response:Yep. If it doesn't seem right, most likely that's the case.
Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for reviewing.
*good
Oh wow, Keep up the god work!
Author's Response:Thank you! So glad you enjoyed the update! :)
i'm glad everyone knows what is going on between the two. i cant wait to see how justin reacts.
Author's Response:Hopefully it's smooth sailing during the extraction. More coming soon.
Thanks a bunch for reviewing.
Oh no, I can't believe Harold would do that to Bee, this is getting intense, I hope Justin does not get hurt. I'm glad Bee told chief about their relationship, she has finally admitted her true feelings. Great chapter
Author's Response:Yes I know :( So much is going on. But it's all coming to an end soon. Glad you enjoyed the update and thanks so much for reviewing!
Fantastic! Poor Bee and Justin...I STILL can't stand Agent Carly! How many times and how many ways must Justin tell her to stop meddling? It is going to be torture waiting on the next chapter! Thank you!
Author's Response:I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It was kinda a challenge writing this chapter, for some reason *sighs* Thanks so much for reviewing! :D
Never disappoints ! Great update I thought I had it figured out but boy was I wrong! Is Bee using protection ? Lol
Author's Response:Thank you so much. And yes, she's using with Hal. She was at first with Justin but not anymore lol. I should've explained it more in the chapters. But any way, glad you're still enjoying.
Whoa...Nice!!! Definitely did not see that one coming. Carly needs to get a serious grip! I don't think that she has any intentions whatsoever of keeping her part of the bargain. She is still just TOO nosy about what is going on with Bee and Justin. I do hope that Bee doesn't get pregnant by Hal. Hmmm... I'm starting to wonder if more than one couple may be involved. The possiblities are endless...Thank you for the update and please keep it coming!
Author's Response:Carly is nosy and as no life. After Justin received that medication from Sharon, you don't know who is involved now. It could be more than one person. You really dont't know for sure yet. Glad to keep you interested and thanks for reviewing.
Go away Carly and mind your business. And this is crazy seems like the whole neighbourhood is involved.
Author's Response:Haha Carly is something else and I know. You don't know who it is! LOL
Wow just wow I don't even know what to say about everything that happened in this update.
Author's Response:Lmao :)
My move to Vegas is finally over. I have internet again. Yay! JT will be here in August and again in November. Yay!
Love this story. Im starting wonder if the whole neighborhood is crooked. As for Carly I still don't trust her. Look forward to more.
Now off to catch up and review.
Author's Response:Yay!!! Vegas? Awesome! Are you gonna see him in concert? If so, congrats! Have fun!
I'm glad you're enjoying the story. So much is going on right now. Take all the time you need to catch up :)
Thanks for reviewing!
well they might as well join the party, since everyonce else is a suspect. cant wait to read about the trip.
Author's Response:Well I'm glad you enjoyed the update. More coming soon. Thanks for reviewing.
Wow you got me on the edge lol. Who got the Cubans? Great chapter
Author's Response:Hopefully you'll soon find out lol. Thanks for reviewing. Glad you enjoyed.
Thanks for the update! Great update as usual!
Author's Response:Thank you. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Great update, I'm so confused about the Cubans, there are too many suspects. I still don't understand why Carly is so hung up on finding out J and Beys relationship. I do agree that they should use protection. The kaplins are weird.
Author's Response:LOL I know. So much is going on. You don't know who to trust or who is involved.
Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Wow this story just keeps getting better, I don't want to jump to conclusions about Harold yet, I'll wait I have my own suspicions about the Cubans. It feels like to roles have reversed first bey was the jealous wife now Justin is the overprotective, jealous husband. Justin wants bey to play the housewife role and stay home and cook for him. Now that Carly is complying hopefully they can get some more leads.
Author's Response:The roles are reversed in a way but Bee is still jealous. And about Harold, you're right. You don't want to jump to conclusions with him because it may not be him lol. Glad you're still enjoying the story. More coming soon.
Thanks a bunch!
I knew it ! Harold are you guilty? I wonder if the chief is gonna make bee take the trip with Harold for info ? That's dangerous but so interesting! Loved this chapter ! Hope their done with maya now!!! Great update !
Author's Response:So much is happening. We don't know if Harold is the guy but he is the number one suspect now. So Maya and Hector aren't out of the loop just yet. Glad you enjoyed the update. Till next time.
Thanks!
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