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Name: sweeties157 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2014 2:36 PM · For: Chapter 10

I bet Sarah is regretting taking this case with Justin's crazy ass lol oh and just to let you know you made a typo near the beginning when bey was talking to Sarah she said her and Justin were having a party instead of nick.  Love this story it's sooooooo good 



Author's Response:

Thank you! Sometimes it happens. Esp since Justin is playing another character and the same for Bee. Trying to keep up with so many stories all together is a bit time consuming so I tend to rush and it doesn't help that I type fast lol.

Glad you're enjoying the story any way! :)



Name: jusbey143 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2014 1:47 PM · For: Chapter 9

They just keep arguing lol... I wish they'd learn how to get along better because they were just fucking each other then the next day bam... That scene  though ..hmm . ha anyway thanks for yhe update!!



Author's Response:

I think they're trying to fight their real feelings. Denying how they truly feel because it's not just sex. There's more and they're trying to hide it. Mainly because of their assignment.

More coming soon and thanks a bunch for reviewing!



Name: sered (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2014 12:19 PM · For: Chapter 9

Aw I love Justin and bey together, their chemistry is undeniable. I know they will find something soon, they just need to work together. I really hate Sarah, I know she is an agent but her attitude stinks. Hopefully Justin and bey begin to make progress in the case soon. Great update, thank you.



Author's Response:

If you think about it, I think it's only been a few days since they'd been living together as husband and wife so I guess it's normal not to find clues so fast. But being trapped together and being attracted to one another isn't helping the situation.

Glad you enjoyed it and thanks so much for reviewing.



Name: sweeties157 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2014 8:56 AM · For: Chapter 9

I'm sure they'll find something and can they find about Sarah already pls. Because they can't keep being nervous around her. Anyway loving the beystin sex scene 😉



Author's Response:

Not that easy but they will find out eventually. Glad you like the sex scenes. I love writing them LOL



Name: XxNikaxX (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2014 7:16 AM · For: Chapter 9

Damn... thanks for getting me all hot and bothered - and right before I leave for work too! This is great! I'm just so into this! You might as well continue because this is what's in demand.

Clearly nobody likes Maya. Beyonce's jealous, Sarah pulled a gun on her, Justin doesn't care, he just wants to bang her, and her husband hits her. That's surely not love. I really do think it's admirable what he did. Still stepping in to save the day, going that extra mile (I nearly died when she said Captain Save a Hoe because I was thinking the same thing). I don't like her, but no woman should have to deal with that.

LOL at how Sarah's just sitting there watching TV like normal as if shit didn't hit the fan earlier. She's so weird. 

Keep em' coming. If your stories were men I'd be a tramp right now. Not sure how that works but you get what I mean... I LOVE 'em~



Author's Response:

Sarah's a stupid, heartless agent and she never should've been recruited. As far as making you hot and bothered lol sorry about that. I can't help it when I start writing about Justin and Bee. They belong together and are so sexy.

I always get carried away. Glad you like the new Story Request idea. I hope it works out fine. :)



Name: Coffee K (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2014 1:58 AM · For: Chapter 1
Captain SAH...No Bey didn't pull that trick out of her bag, lol! I haven't heard that one in a while! I couldn't help but to wonder where Sarah went and what she was up to while Justin and Bey (ahem) briefed each other. So far, I don't think any of the neighbors can be trusted, especially Maya. I can't wait to see where this is headed. Thank you for the update!

Author's Response:

LOL it came out of nowhere. I think I heard someone say it a few days ago and it just gave me flashbacks of when I was a teen. Thought it would be funny to add.

But you never know with the neighbors. Thanks for reviewing!



Name: vmck (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2014 11:18 PM · For: Chapter 9

This story brings the heat.  These two are awesome together.  I'm still wondering about Sarah though. Can't wait  for the next update. 



Author's Response:

We all know Sarah is an undercover agent but you don't know what her real intentions are. More coming soon. Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you enjoyed the update. Justin and Bee are hot together



Name: jusbey143 (Signed) · Date: Apr 28, 2014 6:57 PM · For: Chapter 8

Sarah's getting annoying. I don't know why she's still there to check up on B and J if there were cameras everywhere. And Maya, I don't trust her at all. It's pretty obv why... Well.the same goes to the Kaplins. I don't trust them lol. They're a nice married couple but who knows maybe it's just an act? Maybe...



Author's Response:

Maybe it is an act. You can't really tell who's in on it although everyone has their eyes set on The Lopez's lol. Esp after that comment Juan Carlos made.

Thanks for reviewing!



Name: Coffee K (Signed) · Date: Apr 28, 2014 2:43 PM · For: Chapter 7

OMG! "You are suppose to be pretending to be my wife...you can't even do that right...HA HA HA!!! These two are something else. Your intimacy discriptions are off the CHAIN! Thank you for the updates and PLEASE keep them coming...I know, I know, sigh...I'm addicted, SMH!



Author's Response:

Lmao well I'm glad you're enjoying so far. They are a trip lol.

Thanks!



Name: sweeties157 (Signed) · Date: Apr 28, 2014 2:21 AM · For: Chapter 8

Just kill Sarah please. Don't even care that she's an agent she's annoying and she's gonna do something stupid and tell on beystin (bringing it back lol). I hope they find out about her soon so she can go back to where she came from. Although I doubt it. I think she's on to something about maya tho; it was really weird what her son said that's if he's even hers. OH OH OH I love how you slipped in that comment about the cameras!! I just hope that when beystin do eventually do something nothing happens where the cameras are. 



Author's Response:

So far nothing has happened around the cameras. Except for innocent kisses BUT I also mentioned that the agents at the safe house are hardly watching the cameras. It'll be that ONE time when they do and that's when Beystin will probably be having hot sex in the kitchen on the floor or all over the living room lol.



Name: lucky (Signed) · Date: Apr 27, 2014 10:13 PM · For: Chapter 8

great update.



Author's Response:

Thanks chica! :)



Name: vmck (Signed) · Date: Apr 27, 2014 9:55 PM · For: Chapter 7

Awww suki suki now.....



Author's Response:

LOL :D



Name: XxNikaxX (Signed) · Date: Apr 27, 2014 9:44 PM · For: Chapter 8

*sinister gutteral laugh* Finally, feelings are out in the open. 

Love Uhh.... Square? (Lemme see: J. Bee, Sarah, Maya) Yupp, love square. I love IT!

Sarah, I don't even know you, but I damn sure don't like you! You had to be the paranoid bitch and pull the gun right? How do you explain that? Easy, She's fucking psycho!!

She shouldn't test Justin, that man can make hurricanes feel like a gentle breeze. What's stopping him from kicking her ass out, as far as they know she's a Thurston (her thirsty ass), Oh right, because the man's name was White! You'd think as a supervising CIA agent, she'd look into the information they've gathered thus far and give a believable background.

I'm sure if she even got a reason to believe it's more than just work going on in that bed room, she'd report them instantly because she wants Mr. Sexy Back for her damn self (She's such a Thurston!)

As bad as it is to say, I don'tfeel sorry for Maya, Anyone who goes through that and still defends that person most likely doesn't want help. After she poisoned hus ass,he still went over there to help her. >.> 

Anyway, I can finally see Bee's struggle, even though she's clearly given up the fight and told him the truth.I'm just waiting for the earth-shattering orgasamic sex now! 

I loved chapter eight!



Author's Response:

Your Thurston comments are hilarious! Yes, Sarah is an inexperienced CIA agent. What type of agency are they working for? Agents aren't watching the cameras from the safe house like they should. Undercover agents (Sarah) are pulling guns on ppl without the facts. So much drama is going on lol.

So glad you enjoyed this update!

Thanks for your long reviews :D lol



Name: mia (Signed) · Date: Apr 27, 2014 6:41 PM · For: Chapter 8

Why am I an addict for these updates on this story ?! I think I'm gonna stay away for awhile so when I come back there is lots of the parkers !!




Author's Response:

LOL don't stay awayyyy!!! Haha well that's good to hear that you're addicted.

Glad you're enjoying!



Name: sered (Signed) · Date: Apr 27, 2014 1:52 PM · For: Chapter 8

Great update. I don't trust Maya, and her abused women act, I think her and hector know about the Cubans. Justin and Bey are fully acting like a married couple, they just need to control their emotions a little better, especially around Sarah. This camera situation is risky, I don't want them too get caught by the chief. Totally hooked on this story.



Author's Response:

LOL well it will probably happen but at the last minute. *hint hint* And your instincts might be right. Won't know yet lol.

Glad you're hooked. Thanks for reviewing



Name: imaginations_22 (Signed) · Date: Apr 27, 2014 1:44 PM · For: Chapter 8

 I'm confused right now, so camera's are in the kitchen and living room connected throughout the house so technically they've been caught kissing already from the kitchen argument? So the chief already knows something is up between the two which is why he sent the other woman kinda....right o.O?



Author's Response:

No. The chief knows they can't get along and as for the cameras being in the kitchen and around the house, in the chapter I mentioned that no one hardly watches from the safe house (because they're not doing their job lol) so they have no idea about the intimacy between bee and justin since cameras aren't hooked up in the bedrooms and bathrooms. Sarah was sent to keep an eye on them and be their back up in case something happened.



Name: KayJayT (Signed) · Date: Apr 26, 2014 1:41 PM · For: Chapter 7

I'm so glad they finally caved, they won't be able to stop tho especially if its that good. What is going on with Maya? Is she who they are looking for hmmmmm.... Update soon love constent updates



Author's Response:

You will find out soon!!! LOL

Thanks for reviewing



Name: mia (Signed) · Date: Apr 25, 2014 11:00 PM · For: Chapter 7

Why are they so sexy together !! Lol this story is too good ! It's seems Beyonce only gets Jealous around maya I thought she was over it when she was playing with the kids but other than that she seems like she just needed sex but now their getting attached😳



Author's Response:

Bee knows how to ACT around ppl but she seems to be dwelling onto the past and what Justin did before. I agree, they are sexy together. Glad you enjoyed the update. More coming soon!

Thanks!



Name: sered (Signed) · Date: Apr 25, 2014 7:08 PM · For: Chapter 7

I love the plot twist you added with Sarah's character, so unexpected. Bey is really developing feelings for Justin and it is showing. Justin has notices that Bey has an issue with Maya and is using it when he wants to make her jealous. I wonder why Sarah has Justin's gun, I assume that Maya tried to do something, she seems shady. Although they think they are failing J and Bey are actually coming across as a real couple. Thanks for the update, can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

So much is going on with "the parkers" and this new agent that came into place. I will post another chapter soon. I'll try this evening. But glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks for reviewing



Name: XxNikaxX (Signed) · Date: Apr 25, 2014 4:51 PM · For: Chapter 7

What the HELL? 

Bad timing Maya....or Sarah... who ever the hell rang the doorbell. 

What's Sarah doing with Justin's gun?

Where are the Kids?

What's GOING ON!!!

I KNEW it! I fucking KNEW something was up with Maya? Coming out in the hot ass sun with her short shorts and no bra on, who the hell does that? Doesn't it feel weird to have some big ol' titties and wear no bra? If I do that I feel like my stuff's a pair of wet socks on a clothesline! It feels gross!

Why the hell couldn't Sara keep her damn cool? She's gonna blow their cover!! I'm liking this fake marrige thing! There's always a sara coming to fuck shit up (speaking from experience).

Anyway, Love the fact that you uploaded chapter seven already! I'm lovin it! 

In all honestly I was gasing around the room like ''What the fuck does he mean,  letting out the fustrations first then apologizing after?" Then it hit me, I was like 'Oooohhh' I felt like a nerdy virgin! I just don't get hints too well. -___-

I'm gonna be stalking the site for chapter eight. ;)



Author's Response:

LOL well Maya rung the door bell. There's more coming next chapter. I'll try my best to post tonight. If not, just keep an eye out. It'll be up soon. Glad you enjoyed the update. Thanks for reviewing!



Name: sweeties157 (Signed) · Date: Apr 25, 2014 4:37 PM · For: Chapter 7

Woah bee needs to calm down! All this flip flopping she's doing with her emotions is unnecessary! And omg what is that ending all about! I know you've update quite a lot the past few days but update again whenever you can pls



Author's Response:

LOL I'll try to update some more. But yeah, too much emotions with Bee lol.

Thanks for reviewing



Name: KayJayT (Signed) · Date: Apr 24, 2014 11:56 PM · For: Chapter 6

I so need the next chapter. Lol I am hooked on this one too. Justin always gets his way so she should just go head and stop fighting it, cause it's much easier to cave lol 



Author's Response:

I agree! Who can say NO to him? LOL Glad you're enjoying. Thanks for the review!



Name: lucky (Signed) · Date: Apr 24, 2014 9:40 PM · For: Chapter 6

you are killing me here, i want them to be together so bad. i cant wait to read the next chapter,



Author's Response:

LOL well I'm sure by now you've read ch 7 and is hopefully satisfied :)

Thanks for reviewing!



Name: sered (Signed) · Date: Apr 24, 2014 10:22 AM · For: Chapter 6

Yes for the update, my new fave story. I love how both of them are opening up. I think the whole Sarah situation is weird, I hope she is genuwine. Bey better start acting more like a wife, with Sarah staying with them I don't know how they will pull this separate room situation they have going on. I'm really loving Justin's character, he seems like a great guy.



Author's Response:

Oh there's more. I'm sure you got to ch 7 by now. Justin is really down to earth, like a real man in this story lol.

More coming soon. Thanks for reviewing!



Name: XxNikaxX (Signed) · Date: Apr 24, 2014 8:37 AM · For: Chapter 6

Damn it! It was so close to happening! Sparks were about to fly, They were so close to being Dangerously in Love, Crazy in Love and Drunk in Love! 

I don't know how she survived, if Justin was laying on top of me, I might have died. She so wants him! I can imagine Justin walking out the room with a smirk on his face like 'yeah, she wants me.' 

I'm so glad you decided to upload a new chapter of this, I refresh the home page at LEAST twice every couple hours xP (Yeah, I'm always here.)  My heart almost jumped out of my chest when I saw chapter six. I squealed. Anyway, This is addicting. Keep 'em coming! :D :D



Author's Response:

You're too sweet. I didn't think anyone would like the story that much but I'm glad you guys do. And yes, I'd go crazy if he was on top of me too. I wouldn't let him go lol. Keep coming to the site and reading. I really appreciate it.

Thanks a bunch!



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