Thank you for all the update of all the lovely story's :)
Thank you for all the update of all the lovely story's :)
Thank you for all the update of all the lovely story's :)
Author's Response:You're welcome. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
justin get him, great update.
Author's Response:Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. :)
This story is like a fine wine, with each chapter so far it just keeps getting better. Justin in on his A game with his observations of Carly. She IS up to something and I am so glad that he gave her that check mate chat, with her scandalous acting self. I need Bee to catch up and get on the same page with Justin, just a little bit quicker. She has re-focused some, but is about to lose that because she is bent upon getting back at Justin for doing his job (even though he knows that he is enjoying that attention from Maya, SMH!). I am loving all of these different characters/potential suspects, IMO they are amping up this mystery. I can't wait to see more of what develops with Hal and Bee because basically, Justin deserves to have some competition at this point to help take him down a notch or two. Even though, we know Justin and Bee's chemistry always triumphs in the end...Hehehe! More, more, more!
Author's Response:I am really trying to keep the story interesting. And of course he's enjoying it! He's a man lol. However, Bee and Justin can't help themselves. They may have fun with other ppl but at the end of the day....all they see is each other. The mystery, I love mysteries.
I hope to keep you entertained till the very end! :)
Thanks for reviewing.
This chapter was AWESOME! I loved it! The love confession has finally happened! Now Maya is something else I think her husband could be part of the kidnaping but then Hal has me questioning myself.
Author's Response:Everybody is betting on Hal now. First it was Hector. I bet that's what you were thinking first huh? LOL
So glad you enjoyed the update. More coming soon.
cant wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response:Can't wait to write the next chapter lol :)
Glad you enjoyed!
Great update. I'm really confused about the Cubans, there are too many suspects. J and B are so cute, their chemistry is too much. I think Carly is trying to sabotage their relationship. It will be difficult for the both of them to control their jealously especially as they are both sleeping around. I can't wait to find out more about hector and Hal they both seem shady.
Author's Response:LOL well we all want Hal to be shady because we don't want him to be with Bee. But it could be anybody. The cubans, Hal, The Kaplins...
Glad you enjoyed. Thanks a bunch.
What if the suspect is the least obvious person... lol watch it be Harold lol. Thanks for the update! Loved it especially the last part haha
Author's Response:Justin is already targeting Hal because he's jealous that Bee is "interested" in him. So we don't know. It could be Hal. It could be Maya or Hector. *shrugs* Till next update.
Thanks for reviewing. Glad you enjoyed it. Esp the last part lol.
Yayyyy finally admitted they loved each other. I don't like maya or Hal they're just gonna make things more complicated for beystin like beystin are so jealous it's crazy.
Author's Response:LOL they are overly jealous but that's because they're so crazy for each other. Too bad Maya and Hal won't go away that easily :/
Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for the review
Carly is very much annoying but im happy he got his feelings out so. Maybe she can stop feeling so jealous.
Author's Response:LOL yeah things will be more complicated though. They still are agents and have to play certain roles.
Glad you enjoyed the update. Thanks for the review
Hopefully Carly stops annoying me in the next update, I noticed she is always mentioning how how Bey finds Hal attractive to justin, it's like she knows it gets to him
Author's Response:Ha Ha exactly. She's just trying to start trouble. Maybe she's trying to prove some point. She knows something's going on between them and she's trying to bring it to light. So uncool lol.
Damn she in love. They had sex once. Was the D that good.Oh boy these two should have kept it professional until after the job. Now beyonce has HAl sniffing after her like a dog in heat. And Carly well....i still don't trust that trick. She make me itch sneaky witch.
Author's Response:Lmfao! You crack me up. There's so much going on with them lol. Carly, Bee, Justin. Now Hal and Maya lol. More coming soon.
Thanks for reviewing
Great update! I'm so confused though lol...I don't think I could sit there knowing he's doing what he's doing even though it's his job . I'd feel really weird knowing he's upstairs having sex for information while I'm here just listening, like NO! Lmao, But i'd definitely keep Hal occupied aha ;)
Author's Response:LOL I understand where you're coming from. And Hal is a character you will be seeing more often now. Bee is so pissed, she's gonna do some "two can play that game" type of ish lol.
Thanks for reviewing
Ugh I hate that he had to have sex with maya! And what is she talking about she loves him?! Crazy lady; got the D and now she's talking crazy lol. Bee needs to behave herself like I understand she care but she needs to realise that they're here for a job!! After they do that then you can get all jealous and stuff till then they should really keep it professional but we all know that's not gonna happen. Can't believe Justin said he loved her like whaaaaaaaat
Author's Response:Which part you can't believe? When Justin said he "loved" Maya or when he said it to Bee?
JT/Bee are being very unprofessional and you know women. We can be emotionally unstable sometimes. But they are just doing their jobs. He's playing the cheating husband role now to get to Hector lol.
Thanks for reviewing
Great update, I really can't with justin sleeping with maya. He secreatly enjoys it but then gets mad at Bey for talking to Harold. I think Bey is defiantly getting to emotionally involved, I think she should put her guard up until after the case or she will just fall deeper for Justin. Maya is too much, how the hell has she already fallen for Justin. Harold seems like an interesting character.
Author's Response:LOL well you will be seeing more of Hal's character in future chapters. He asked her to visit his gym so she will most likely follow through esp after what happened with Justin and Maya.
Glad you enjoyed. Thanks!
Dang Bey is really getting caught up with her emotions... she's too jealous! But are we gonna get more of Bey/Hal interaction on upcoming chapters?
Author's Response:There's more to come. I don't know if you remembered, but Hal asked her to visit his gym.
this chapter made me sad, but i'm glad they know that sarah is an agent.
Author's Response:Well the truth is out now. But they still need to find out about Hector and the mystery behind him. More coming soon.
Thanks for reviewing.
I'm glad that the truth is out about Carly but I still don't care for her, especially after her run-tell-that-behind purposely brought up Hal to Justin in front of Bee. Carly's presence it will only complicate the situation between Justin and Bee, too. I would not be surprised if Carly develops feelings for Justin. Bee is going to have to try to pull it together although I understand why she is hurt. I think that Hal will be a good equalizer for Bee, though and we will see if Justin can keep his cool the way he expected Bee to keep her cool about Maya...Somehow I think things are about to be set off at this party. This should be good!
Author's Response:Well you have good intuition. Justin won't be happy seeing Bee mingle with Harold because he cares about her too. Maya will be there and Carly. So that whole incident between those two will most likely come up as well. A lot will be going on at the party.
Any way, thanks for reviewing!
No Bee ! I hate seeing her hurt ! But it is Justin's job, Bee needs some man action with Harold ...Justin getting all the girls where's Bee's men ? lmao
Author's Response:Harold is coming up! He will be at the party and there's gonna be some jealousy in the air. Justin is getting closer to Maya for his job and Bee will probably do the same with Harold.
Thanks for reviewing.
Great update, Justin did a great job in getting maya to confide in him, I think his on to something. I'm glad that they know about the cameras and Sarah. Poor bey, she has completely fallen for Justin. I can't wait until the party, Harold seems like an interesting character.
Author's Response:Well he is an interesting character. More interesting things will happen at the party and being that Bee is emotional and falling for Justin, you know how that's gonna go. Jealousy will be in the air lol.
Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for reviewing.
Ugh Justin is an idiot but then again he's doing his job which is the whole point but still poor bee :(
Author's Response:LOL well it's hard on him because he doesn't want to do it but he knows he has to. :(
Thanks for reviewing.
I really can't stand Sarah, she is too irrational for my liking. The party is a really good idea hopefully they get some leads. Justin and bey are such a hot couple, it seems like Justin doesn't mind admitting his feelings. I still think bey is a bit hesitant of what they're doing but can't resist Justin. It's funny because they are really pulling this married couple act off.
Author's Response:LOL Bee has too much pride. She doesn't wanna admit that she can actually LIKE him. Everyone is just being irrational. They're all behaving like dumb low level cops instead of real agents.
Glad you're enjoying and thanks!
great chapter. but what i dont understand is why not kick sarah out. justin already knows she laid about her fathers name, and that she is hiding something so why not send her on her way.
Author's Response:Justin is probably trying to figure her out but in the process, he's being irrational. He's so quick to attack her instead of playing it smart. I think everyone (justin and bee) are frustrated and are letting the case get to them. :/
Sarah makes the story a bit interesting so I don't wanna get rid of her just yet.
Wow...Glad I have the air on because it's getting warm in here! (cough, cough). I wish Justin would have left that phone right where it was and just continued to monitor Sarah a little bit more. I all ready don't like her because she was so quick to report Justin and Bee without taking the time to be more thorough, ie. trying to find out WHY they seem to be acting strange and making sure it did not affect their abilities to continue on the case. Also, her run-tell-that behind purposely telling Justin about Hal...I would not be surprised if it came out later that Sarah has a certain attraction to Justin. It will be interesting to see how Justin reacts to Hal, face to face. In the meantime, Justin knows what he is doing by "reminding" Bee of the feelings that she has for him and vice versa, lol...Thank you!
Author's Response:No, thank you. So much is going on. All of them are acting like amateurs to be honest. But it makes the story interesting. Hal and Justin are coming up next. Glad you like the story!
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