those two look cute together.
Author's Response:They do. It'll be awesome if they were together in real life :)
She wants him to make it work with Brit yet they can't keep their hands to themselves and still wanna "keep in touch" lol theyre a mess but I love it.
Author's Response:It's like her conscious kicks in one minute then the next she's like...fuck it. LOL
Glad you enjoyed.
Thank you for another chapter. I like the conversation between Britney and Bee. I could actually imagine the frustration between Justin and Bee from trying to fight their true feelings towards each other, especially since Justin was officially unavailable. I also love the Pusher Love Girl reference...When Justin sings that song in real life, he makes you visualize the same stars that he was talking about seeing...with his bad self! As usual when I get through reading your stories, I get the urged to look at some more Justin/Bee videos, lol...Sigh, I know, I know...SMH!
Author's Response:You're welcome! And I'm trying to make the story realistic as possible. He's taken now but it doesn't change his feelings for Bee :)
Glad you enjoyed the update. Thanks a bunch!
These two have an undeniably, rare chemistry. I must admit, Britney trying to cover for Justin and Beyonce, then Beyonce asking Britney to be there for Justin were unexpected twists that were nicely placed.All though Matthew Knowles can come off as overbearingly cruel at times, he was being a protective father, especially considering that they are all from the south, with that comes a lot of negative and ignorant views, sterotypes, fears and concerns that present themselves when you are in an interracial relationship.I keep getting blown away by how deep Justin's love was for Beyonce at such a young age, despite having to deal with all of the other typical teenage issues and added pressures of being teen-aged celebrities during that time. Beyonce's unselfish actions demonstrated class and a depth of inner beauty that makes it understandable why Justin fell for her. Thank you for the update. I was like an excited kid at a theme park when I saw that you added another chapter to this story, lol.
Author's Response:You're welcome. I didn't know you were enjoying it that much lol. Their chemistry is rare esp since they're so young. Things will just get even more complicated as time passes. Now he's in a relationship and he actually cares about Brit but Bee will always be number one. :)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Appreciate it!
on bee stop running ughhhh
Author's Response:Lmao Justin can't have it that easy lol
Great update! More, more, more please!!!
Author's Response:LOL more coming soon! Thank you so much :D
Thank you for the new chapter. I like how Justin stood up to Matthew, but still showed him respect as Beyonce's father. Justin is an old soul, so it was only natural that he knew what to say at that moment. I like how you captured that essence of him in your writing.The scenes with Matthew reminded me of a verse from That Girl...I still enjoy looking at the clips of Justin performing songs from his last album, because you can see the passionate glow in his eyes as he sings. His AMA 2013 performance was a prime example of that. His performance was mind blowing because the feelings were geniunely there. (Even Miss Taylor became painfully aware of it). He loves him some Bee, all of the other women where/are just bits and pieces of the traits in her (Bee) who is his real love...So glad he "finally figured it out", lol.
Author's Response:Yes he loves him some Bee. I try my best to make it realistic with the characters and so forth depending on how they behave on TV. And he just seems like that type of person to react that way when it comes to Matthew. There's gonna be a lot going on because I still haven't added his relationship with Brit, Cam, Alyssa etc. But in the end, it'll always be Bee who he really loves.
thanks so much for updating! cant wait for more
Author's Response:You're welcome. More coming soon. Thanks!
Great update... love that pic of Justin on this banner
Author's Response:Me too!!! LOL and thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed.
Love it d84;a039;
Author's Response:Thank you! :D Glad you did
WONDERFUL! You did it, awesomely! I'm liking where it's going.
Matthew needs to let his daughter live a little. You can't keep her sheltered from the world for too long because when shit hits the fan she's gotta know how to get through things for herself. Then she can teach her kids and so on. Besides... It's Justin, he gets what he wants.
I've been watching his 'Love Never felt so Good' video for hours. I'm just helplessly in love..... I'm addicted... Anyway, keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to all the other updates I'm gonna make you do. ;) (The race is on!)
Author's Response:LOL the video is beautiful. And it's so great because I'm a huge fan of both! Just the duet I've been waiting for! I'm glad you enjoyed the update. I'll be sure to add the MJ/JT duet in the story as well :) And Matthew smh. He's too over protective.
Please update soon!!
Author's Response:Updates coming soon! Thanks for being patient
Thoroughly enjoying this story...This is better than the love story depicted in the Cadilac (sp) Records movie, it's just too good not to be told. I can't wait to see more, thank you!
Author's Response::D Thank you so much. Wow! It's better than Cadillac? LOL
More coming soon. I will update when I can. Thanks so much for the review!
I LOVE THIS STORY.
Author's Response:Thank you! Glad you love the story :) More coming soon
hey sweetie. I know i been MIA but i'm planning a retirement ceremony and reception for my husband plus a family and friends party after the main event that day. but enough about me. I just caught up with my updates and i loved them all. But i will say i HATE Matthrew Knowels....makes you wander if this was how he really was. look forward to more from you soon. I have on question ...In trying to figure out their relationship how many years have they dated off and on?
Author's Response:Retirement? That's great! And I understand. I know you have a life outside of BABY-J.ORG lol. I wish youall the best of luck!
Any hoo, we will never know. He looked like a strict dad lol. As for Bee and Jay, it started in 1998 till they officially hooked up in 2012 after his breakup with Jess (the media not knowing). This is in between his other relationships with Brit, Cameron, and Jessica. I will explain more soon. Glad you enjoyed!
aww youre not gonna be updating for a while? well i understand lol its like its easy to write stories, its not. i hoe everything goes well woth u though! about thr story, matthew is strict..like she cant even have a boy friend, literally a friend who's a boy... (i know its a lie when he said be'll continue seeing her as a friend bc its more than that)
Author's Response:Yeah Matthew is a strict father :/ Hopefully she stands up for herself. It's hard. Being crazy over someone and only for your father to get in the way.
I will continue updating but just not as much. It's kinda hard trying to update every day and working. But I go on vacation in another week so hopefully that will give me more time to update.
Glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review.
i think beyonce should standup to her father. i cant wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response:Hopefully she will grow some balls sooner or later. Glad you enjoyed.
Thanks for reviewing.
they both need to stop dancing around. i cant wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response:LOL teenagers :)
Great update!!! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:Thank you! Glad you like. More coming soon.
Whew!!! I can't wait for some more! Thank you...
Author's Response:You're welcome! :D Thanks for reviewing
Beyonces dad shouldn't approve of Justin that would be a cool storyline ! This is getting good !
Author's Response:Dads never do. They always have problems with boys who are interested in their daughters for some reason lol.
Glad you're enjoying so far! :D
Justin shouldve just told the truth about Britney because if she finds out about it from others it'll be worse. Anyway, thanks for the update!
Author's Response:There's nothing going on between them now but there was something in the past (which he should've mentioned). She will find out eventually.
Glad you enjoyed the update and thanks for reviewing.
thank you for the update. but wat is going on, you have not been updating regularly like you always do. i hope everything is ok.
Author's Response:Hey! I know. Ever since I moved, I fell behind and it's just taking some time to get back in the groove of things. But I'm trying to make sure I update every week if not every day. Sorry for the lack of daily updates. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter :)
Please, write some more soon! I am so glad to see some more recent stories with Beyonce and Justin. I simply can not get enough of them. I'm hoping that the gap between their meeting and when Britney entered (and ultimately exited) will be addressed. How Beyonce helped Justin handle the devastation of being cheated on.
I enjoy the real facts and information that are mixed into the stories. Please keep talking about the songs throughout their careers that were inspired by their feelings for each other.
I also hope to see how Jessica Biel fits into the scenario and their break-ups, leading Justin back to Beyonce. Love, love your writing!!!
Author's Response:Oh there's more to come. I'm trying to make it close to their real lives. I will update soon. So glad you enjoy the stories. I like them as a couple too. Wish they were together in real life! :D
Thanks so much for updating!!
Why is Danielle back? Hope she doesn't try anything crazy
Can't wait for more 😃
Author's Response:You're welcome,
And I hope so too. There's always some old flame popping up in the picture lol 😃 Glad you enjoyed the update.
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