Loved it! Thanks so much for updating!! Solange & Jess already saying Isla doesn't look like Jay, this is getting good
Can't wait for more
Author's Response:You're welcome. Haha I know. It's gonna be crazy when the truth starts to surface. Thanks for reviewing.
Oh and I hope you had a happy and safe birthday!
Thanks for the update, keep up the good work! I just hope that there isn't a huge twist where Jess and Jay end up in an affair as well lol, that'd be kinda wow! Can't wait for te next part!
Author's Response:LOL I didn't think of anything like that but that would be crazy. Thanks for reviewing. Glad you enjoyed.
loved the update. wow that had to be akward.is it me orin that pic above...Does it look like jessica giving Beyonce the side eye? hmmm
Author's Response:That's why I love that picture. There's something about it. Even how Justin and Bee are looking at each other. Any way, Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for reviewing.
Ooh they are being real sneaky, I thought Justin was going to spill the beans to Trace. Great update!!
Author's Response:He was close. I didn't want him to confess just yet. I don't want them to get CAUGHT just yet. Thanks for reviewing.
They are just to much. I want them to get caught to see Jess reaction. I knew he would fall in love with the baby. Great job loved it
Author's Response:We all don't want him to be with Jess. He belongs with Bee lol. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Love it. i think this is the only story of yours I'm scared to read what's next. haha. because when the shit hit the fan its going to be big. something tells me its coming soon great update.
Author's Response:LOL yes I know. It won't be pretty. I'm glad you enjoyed the update. Thx for reviewing.
Ahaa ! Justin and Bey are...Idk lol
love them though and great update
Author's Response:They have issues and at the same time, can't get enough of each other. It's gonna be some drama when the shit hits the fan. Glad you enjoyed. Thanks!
loved the update! Justin & Bey are freaky, lol! I think they might get caught if that same paparazzi person was watching Justin. can't wait for more!
Author's Response:I know. They better hope he didn't take pics. That would be a disaster. Any way, glad you enjoyed the update. Thanks for reviewing
these two keep digging a hole for themselves. The sooner they tell the truth and get out of those sham marriages the better. Oh boy.SMH great update
Author's Response:LOL shame on them huh? I agree. The sooner the better but we have to keep this story interesting right? :D Glad you liked. Thanks!
They are to freaky...lol I love this story keep up the good work.
Author's Response:I know. They're like two ticking bombs when they're together lol. Thanks for reviewing.
I bet there will be pictures!!! Nice update ....glad they did more than kiss and make up.
Author's Response:LOL we don't know yet. But if there is, they will have a lot of explaining to do. Thanks for reviewing. Glad you liked.
Now that was powerful! It was like you were in the room and could feel both their pain. Awesome work! Now can they just kiss and make up...at least until someone finds out!
Author's Response:LOL there's more to that night. Sorry I left it like that. I'm so bad lol. I will add more when I get a chance. Thanks for reviewing. Glad you liked the update.
I completly understand why she is so upset with him. I think they both need to get a grip with reality. They are so dsyfunctional. You can tell how much they love each other but now its not about them its about the baby. They need to figure out what they are gonna do. Is Justin gonna be a secret daddy cause I dont see how that is gonna work at all. Updat soon Love it!!!!!
Author's Response:It's either a secret daddy or letting everyone know the truth and with the way they are behaving, I don't think they wanna go that route. At least for now. They will start seeing one another secretly tho. But like I always say, the truth comes to light. :D Thanks for reviewing.
They are so dysfunctional ! Lol but so In love aha
i bet he's gonna fall hard for that little girl, so cute
Author's Response:I agree. Very. He's already falling. You can tell lol. Thanks for the review!
This update was everything!!! I'm glad Justin has decided to be a father to Isla and I like that they're wanting to spend more time together. I hope no one followed Bey to the hotel. Great update! Looking forward to more :)
Author's Response:I know. That'll be trouble. It'll be all in the tabloids lol. I'm glad you enjoyed the update. I will update when I can. Thanks!
i wonder how itll go because it wasnt even that long that shes there and they were already arguing. thanks for the update again. youre the best!
Author's Response:It'll be a long night for sure. I will write more about it next update. Thanks for reviewing. Glad you liked.
I like this one !!!! I can't wait for you to dig deeper. What's really going on because you can tell he loves her. Update again soon...
Author's Response:Will know soon enough. Glad you like it! :) Thanks.
he finally stopped resisting lol
Author's Response:Lmao yes he did. Ha-ha.
Wow he is such a sucker for her that he'll even risk his relationship with his daughter to punish her for being with jayz . But I think If he sees isla in person interacting with Bee his heart will change especially if they have a little cute moment:) but loved the update !
Author's Response:A lot will change in time. Especially when he finally meets Isla. What's going on between them can be solved. All they have to do is divorce the ppl they're with and be together :) Thanks for the review!
This is such a great story and the chemistry between Bey and Justin is amazing, its just a shame that when Bey starts talking about isla he kinds of misses the subject and trys to make a variety of different excuses, and I know its hard for the situation that they are in but they have a daughter there for should have her in mind as well, Im really excited for when you update again because this update has been awsome and I just love reading this story x
Author's Response:Thank you so much! It's nice to know you are enjoying the story. Justin is very immature and doesn't want to take care of his responsibility as being a father to Isla because he's too afraid of what ppl would think when they find out he was cheating. AND is afraid of hurting his wife even though he doesn't love her as he does Beyonce. A part of him wants to be there as a father but he's just not making the effort. I'm so glad you like so far and thanks for leaving a review. :D
I'm in love with this story but I don't like Justin in this so far. Maybe that will change as I keep reading. Thank u for the update, more please
Author's Response:LOL Justin's an ass so far. I agree. Hopefully he wakes up and realizes what's important and that's being a father to his daughter. Thanks for reviewing. Will update soon.
This is so good! 😀 They're both in love with one another and want to be together but now are married to other people. I hope Justin finally decides to be there for his daughter. Thanks for updating! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:Right on the money! They married the wrong ppl. :( Glad you enjoyed it. Appreciate the review!
Oh wow they just need to be together and leave their spouses if they know they love each other. Justin need to see his daughter.
Author's Response:There's so much backwards s**t going on between them. But like I always say, the truth always comes to light. Thanks for reviewing
girrrlll these two. man i can't wait for the stuff o hit the fan. they need to fix it soon before jay z gets too attached. damn its going to be a mess. ok update soon.
Author's Response:LOL and you know it! It won't be nice, that's for sure. Thanks for the review!
This story is off to a great start!! Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response::D I'm so glad you like it so far! I will update soon. Thanks for reviewing. Appreciate it.
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