I have no words, they both piss me off in their own way lol
Author's Response:LOL entertaining though?
Haha thanks for reviewing.
OMG!! As much of an ASS that he is for whatever reason it turns me on .... Lol you gotta update this one really soon. I'm dying to find out what's next. I have a love hate thing for this Justin. more please
Author's Response:Haha well Justin can only get away with being an ASS and being sexy at it. I updated the story so I hope you enjoy. Thanks a bunch!
great update
Author's Response:Thank you! :D Appreciate it.
It's funny seeing Justin act jealous. I hope Neston sticks around Beyonce needs to have fun whilst she waits for Justin to get his act together. I really want Bey to quit, it would be interesting to see his relation if she actually went ahead with it. Justin needs to realise that he can't control her. Great update, defiantly my fav story now.
Author's Response:LOL it's funny you say that about Nestor. Now that I read your review, it makes me think now that mentioning Nestor in the next update was a good idea lol. I hope you enjoy it and I'm glad you liked the update. :D
Aww when I thiught everything would go so well cus they.actually had a real conversation for the 1st time.... but Justin effed it up by having sex with another woman. Wish they would have more of those serious moments like get to.know each other
Author's Response:Slowly but surely they are becoming closer. It will take time though. Old habits die hard. He just couldn't help himself lol. Thanks for reviewing.
Glad he opened up a little....but bee needs to stop lying to herself. She knows she likes him and the more she complains about his whoreish ways, the more Justin is gonna realise that.
Author's Response:Haha it's so obvious. She gets jealous when he flirts and has sex with other women. He shouldn't be such a whore though lol. Thx for reviewing!
They are too special. She need to just let go and let him give it to her good. She needs a stress reliever. She no she want it trying to convince herself that she don't. Please update this soon. Love it, great job
Author's Response:LOL you are too funny but you're right. She's resisting only because of his reputation. How long will it last though? Hmm...
Thanks for reviewing! :)
Wow this chapter was a roller coaster. First, Justin opened up to Bey and it seemed like there was a slight change in him. However old habits don't die quickly, Justin was so close to getting Bey to open up a little. I feel as though Bey has been through a lot with In previous relationships. Although she is very confident and strong she comes across as insecure at the same time. Thanks for the update, I'm defiantly hooked.
Author's Response:You're welcome! I know. Old habits die hard. He just couldn't help himself when he saw that woman lol. It takes time. Glad you enjoyed the update and thanks for leaving a review!
Yes she will let it go alll the way...lol If she see what i see in him that sexiness in him will take over her mind and she will have no choice but to give him what he wants, because she know she want it too...lol Justin is such an ass tho, I can't help but to still love him. I loved this chapter great work.
Author's Response:LOL it's like he makes bad look good. It has to be really hard to resist. Can you imagine yourself in that position knowing how crazy you are about him? I wouldn't even put up a fight lol.
Thanks for reviewing.
Bee needs to clam down! She is being wayyy to violent. I agree with justin about the whole hitting thing(how it's okay for a woman to hit a man but not the other way round) anywayyyy bee needs to stop trying to be the next Muhammad Ali and Justin needs to stop being such a whore.
Author's Response:LOL I concur. The both of them need to change something lol. But he has a lot of patience and he must really like her to take that. Any way thanks for the review!
Ok these two hmmm..what can I say. they trip me out. Beyoncé is violent as hell ..girl you is lucky he not a whore and a thug in one. Because you would have been on the floor. She want him he want her. how shall the two meet in the middle. Great update.
Author's Response:She is SO lucky, I agree. He has a lot of patience when it comes to women hitting him haha. Justin's gonna have to prove himself and change if he wants to make it work with Bee.
Thanks for reviewing!
Loved it ! Gosh the sexual tension is thick but too bad Justin's a dick ! In live with this story :)
Author's Response:Lmao yes I know. They want each other badly especially Justin but Bee won't fall for it. At least not yet. He has to prove himself. :) Any way thanks for reviewing
>_> Oh your just funny! Your a funny little character with these cliffhangers! That's like getting me excited for a new car and you give me an old one it's not right!! (but I see what your doing)...Anyway great update I agree with "Sered" I hop Bey keeps resisting I don't want her to give in too early and then she gets hurt that would be devastating.
Author's Response:Haha Gotta keep ya' interested! And Bee won't give in too early. If she does now, I don't think the story will be entertaining anymore. Glad you enjoyed it any way and thanks a bunch for the review.
Not another cliffhanger, this story is getting more intense and interesting by the updates. I think bey is falling for Justin. Bey needs to continue resisting Justin until he shows signs that he is changing. I wonder how things will be like when they get back from their business trip. Two updates in one week , you are spoiling us, thank you.
Author's Response:I try lol. Bey is falling for him but she's gonna remain strong. She's no fool and she's much more smarter than those women he fools around with. Glad you enjoyed the update. Thanks for reviewing!
Great chapter, update soon
Author's Response:Thank you! I will :)
Yeas Justin, let your emotions out!! Wanna know why he's like this and hopefully he can get some therapy because what's going on with him isn't just something he can get over and stop doing because later on he'll fall in love with bee or whatever. He needs professional help.
Author's Response:He does need help. Maybe all he needs is that one woman who's special to be by his side. That one woman who can change the way he thinks about all women. We'll see! Thanks for reviewing!
I was really into that charter why did you end it there? :( I hope you update soon I wonder what's going to happen between the two its only day one and their already arguing.
Author's Response:Because I love leaving you guys on a cliffhanger lol j/k. You will find out soon. I'll try to update soon though. Glad you enjoyed!
Read the update again ... Confused on whether Justin has a child, or whether he is talking about what he saw his father go through with women.
Author's Response:He doesn't have a child. He's talking about what he watched his father go through when he was a child and also what his friends went through. Not only that, he also had a bad experience with a woman before. I'll explain everything in future chapters. :)
Whoa shit. now we are starting to get why Justin is the way he is. Well let the good times roll. great update.
Author's Response:Haha. Well I'm glad you enjoyed it. I will update when I can. Thanks!
Wow, why did you stop, I was really getting into it. Loved this update, finally Justin's behaviour is starting to make sense. I really hope him and Bey become friends , maybe his attitude will change when he realises not all women are out to get him. Really love Beys character, a strong woman with a good heart.
Author's Response:I just love cliffhangers lol. There's more to come. I'll try to update soon. Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reviewing!
Wow! I would've had a blast talking to him just for the fact that it's hilarious he's such a constant liar/cheater! Ahaa but then again I'm young that's why I think it's funny aha GO BEY ! Lol I feel like their playing tug of war or something with their relationship
Author's Response:LOL Some ppl can change and others can't. We'll see which one is Justin sooner or later. But Bee is doing a great job at standing her ground, isn't she? LOL thanks for the review.
Justin is such a whore!! Like I don't even understand who someone can cheat on someone they're supposed to love to much. Maybe something went down in his childhood or something because it's insane. Wonder how he's gonna get with bee because I know like me she'll most likely be thinking once a cheater always a cheater.
Author's Response:Damn skippy. He's gonna have to really prove himself. And He doesn't love Amerie. You will find out what his issue is soon. Glad you enjoyed!
These hoes have lost their mind and forgotten their place!! It's crazy lol
Author's Response:Lmao I know. Crazy, crazy, crazy lol
Yes Beyonce, so happy she is telling Justin some home truths. I can't wait for the trip, hopefully Justin opens up on the reason he treats women the way he does. Thanks for the update, can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:I know. Bee isn't gonna hide the truth. She's not like those other desperate sluts lol. Glad you enjoyed. Thanks!
ooo, I wonder what the look was lol...keep up the good work!
Author's Response:LOL You know Justin wants Bee and we all know he will try something else again sooner or later. Glad you liked the update!
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