Loved...loved this story! Off to read the sequel
Author's Response:Thank you! Where have you been?! LOL! Glad you enjoyed it. :)
I loved this!!!!! I'm glad they are finally together!!!.. Can't wait for the sequel
Author's Response:Thank you, chica. I'm glad you enjoyed it and didn't get bored lol. Sequel coming up :)
Awww, they are so cute and Justin is such a good man how he made a video of her for the baby. He is totally in love with Bee! I know she's giving it a try so I'm happy! Can't wait till they have their baby I having feeling Justin is gonna be on complete bliss with his child.
Author's Response:Definitely. It will be beautiful. A sequel should be up soon :) Thanks for all of your reviews. I enjoyed reading them lol.
It was only a matter of time before she got pregnant! I'm happy there's gonna be a sequel, can't wait to see where you go with this.
Author's Response:LOL I know. They were slipping up a lot. I'm coming up with ideas so keep an eye out. It won't be too long. Thanks for reviewing!
Finally everything came together and all it took was a baby to bring them together. I like this side of Beyonce she is showing her vulnerability and trusting Justin. Please start the sequel from when the baby is born, I know that they will be good parents. Justin is such a good boyfriend, Bey is very lucky. I wonder whether they will cohabit now that they are expecting a child? Can't wait for the sequel, great story by a great writer.
Author's Response:That's exactly what I was thinking (starting from when the baby is born) lol. Cohabitation will most likely happen. I'm not sure if it will be immediately. But I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I really appreciate your reviews.
This update was a shocker....lol Pregnant wow I am so glad they are a couple now this sequel is gonna be good Great job, I loved this story.
Author's Response:Thank you. I appreciate your reviews and I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I'll try to make the sequel good lol.
P.S these two are really freak nasty, having sex whilst Beyonce is on her period, I don't know what to say.
Author's Response:Justin and Beyonce is the definition of nasty. In a good way though. At least they did it in the shower lol.
Beyonce is trying it, but something tells me that she will realise the error in her ways soon. I'm surprised Justin has'nt got her pregnant yet, these two are like magnets always drawn to each other. I wonder what is up with Kelly, I suspect she secretly likes Justin. Maybe Justin should sleep with someone close to her for her to really understand the seriousness of her games. Great update, I'm addicted to this story.
Author's Response:I don't know. I don't wanna make Bee hate him. Although, I almost made him sleep with Nicole. But she probably will give in soon. Who knows? LOL Thanks for reviewing. Glad you're still interested in the story.
She is pushing her luck! He's not gonna be waiting forever.
Author's Response:Yep I agree. Maybe she will give in soon.....
OMG! Loved this chapter, they are to funny. I can tell he is getting tired though, even though he can't let her go. Bee is to stubborn. Update soon
Author's Response:LOL well I'm glad you liked the update. I think I'm gonna bring it to an ending soon. :/ Thanks for reviewing.
peopke are saying beyonce should close her legs, justin should zip up his pants, it works both ways. justin is playing the victim card whilst sleeping with vanessa. beyonce should not have slept with trace or reggie but she does have the rights to find another friend with benefits. both justin and beyonce are in the wrong.
Author's Response:I know lol. It does work both ways. That's why I said the both of them have issues. It's true! :)
beyonce girl you are a mess, trace and reggie...girl, justin come and get your girl. justin is so jealous but he needs to realise that beyonce has many admirers, something tells me trace will cause more problems. i hope justin and bey used protection, if not things will get even more complicated. justin should stop being a hyprocrite he has slept with vanessa numerous times, he should be careful beyonce could still meet another person. such a great update, i'm on the edge not knowing where this story will go next.
Author's Response:I don't even know where it'll go next. It's a challenge trying to figure out what to add to it, you know....keeping you guys entertained. And yes, I agree. Beyonce is a mess. The both of them have issues. But that's what makes the story interesting lol. I'm glad you're still enjoying it.
Woah, bee is getting around huh? First trace (which was beyond wrong like I get she was sexually frustrated but it shouldn't have been with Justin's so called best friend. Some best friend he is by the way) then reggae (who is engaged!! Like bee man whyyy and then to find out she pretended to be drunk so he'd sleep with her?!?! She needs help man) and finally Justin (although I'm happy when they're together I can't help but think she's still gonna dismiss him and say she doesn't wanna be with him AGAIN, even though we know she loves him) overall bee just needs to sit down, close her legs and think about what she really wants and that should be Justin!! Oh and I couldn't stop laughing at them not caring Kelly was in the room/house. Nice comedy factor there (y)
Author's Response:Yes she's really out of control. The both of them need to sit down and get their act together lol. Glad you enjoyed the update.
I am so shocked at Trace I can't believe he was the one who sent the candy. I can't believe he slept with Bee. I knew he was gonna cave before she did....lol I always enjoy updates from this story it keeps getting better. Can't wait for more
Author's Response:That's really nice to know. I feel guilty skipping some story updates when I add to this one. But I promise, I will update every story when I can. Thanks for coming back.
OH MY GOD! That was.....
Agh ! I love you for being so talented at this ! Lol
Author's Response:LOL well thank you. I'm glad you're still enjoying the story. I'm trying to keep it interesting. :)
I don't think I could have let him walk out that door without giving him my heart. She needs to stop being scared and give in to him before he ends up with Someone else and she looses him completely. Can't wait for that to happen. Great update.
Author's Response:Lol thank you. They will be together eventually. I can't wait to write it lol.
I know I'm still enjoying this!!!!!! Awwwww I wanted to cry with Justin
I know I'm still enjoying this!!!!!! Awwwww I wanted to cry with Justin
Author's Response:Thank you. Lol, I'm glad ur still enjoying it! :D
wow,where do i even begin, you really outdid yourself. beyonce and justin's relationship is becoming more intense, i think she will give in eventually, but suspect more drama will come before that.
Author's Response:Yes you're right. More drama. More sex. And more new characters. Hope you're up for it lol :)
I'm at a lost on what to say and YOU know that is never a problem. These 2. Lord Jesus help me. Justin first you: 1-you don't tell the women you love you smashing another chick but you still love her and only truly want her. You have no right to get upset and cry at the possibilities that she may sleep with someone else now..you are. She got needs just like you but she truly wants you but she not ready for a commimtment(?).I'm not sure if he even knows what the hell he wants anymore. Sleeping with another women and telling Beyoncé about it is not helping your cause because it only seems to make her more stubborn. She is already having an internal struggle with herself about being in a relationship with him now she has to worry about him and someone else. I think he may have just destroyed what leeway he had made. Now Beyoncé what is holding you back baby. Maybe you need to date someone else to make Justin realize how much that shit hurts. Everyone want her to act ghetto fabulous and go off but she handled it like a lady and kept it to herself. I think maybe going on a date or two with someone else may give her some clarity she needs. I know one thing though the fact that someone maybe smashing what he feels is only his is going to drive Justin up the wall. He'll more than likely show his ass. lol I think they need to compromise and communicate better. Justin's my way or no way is not going to work. I think if they don't come up with something they are going to loose each other and it will only be their own fault.
Author's Response:Most definitely. Both of them are young and childish. I didn't explain this in the chapter. A part of him slept with Vanessa to make himself feel better. To make Bee jealous because I agree...he could have kept it to himself. But he didn't. And it probably didn't help him at all. Once he realizes that he's not the only one with needs, he won't be too thrilled. There's so much in store. I will update whenever I can.
AMAZING !!!!!! Loved it ! Wow he loves her sooooo much but I understand Bee in a way because I'm the same way ! But I think Bee needs to release her sexual tension too throw in a hot guy for bee it'll be so interesting lol .
Author's Response:Oh trust me, we haven't even begun lol. All of the jealousy is gonna come pouring out. Justin's having sex with someone and next Bee....let's just say it won't be pretty. I won't say more.
These two are absolutely driving me insane. Justin is laying his heart out on the line and Bee justs keeps acting like she will snap him out of it. Even though Justin says that Bee will never be replaced, she better hurry up before Vanessa gives him something to turn his head. Can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response:I know. She's just being very selfish and stubborn. Eventually she will snap out of it.
This is pissing me off!! But in a good way I love this story.
Author's Response:Well I'm glad that's in a good way lol. At least you're still enjoying it.
ARGHHHHHHHH I seriously wanna smash bee's head against a wall or something, she's being so selfish, doesn't want to be with him but doesn't want him to be with anyone else. She can't have it both ways and you know what, I want Justin to start seeing vanessa, obviously nothing serious because beystin will alway win but just to truly show bee she can't have her cake and eat it too and that she needs to realise that another woman will happily be with Justin.
Author's Response:LOL well he's just being a man. Realistically, he won't stop having sex just because she doesn't want to be with him. I'm just trying to keep you guys interested. :)
I think he was talking about both. I think he is doing the right thing. You never know what you have until its gone and if it comes back then it was yours all along. She is gonna cave, he is to sexy not to..lol. Her heart is gonna force her to be with him. Your mind may say one thing but your heart will win the fight in the end. Good chapter can't wait for the out come update soon.
Author's Response:Thank you. Ur right. She will eventually give in when she realizes what a mistake she's made. I will update soon.
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