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Hi may you update this story when you have the time to thank you
Ok, this is gonna be AWKWARD!!
Honestly, I thought it was gonna be like 4 one shots and a final conclusion that's why I saved this one for later. Come to find out it's an actual story, Holy Shit....
We all know he's gonna fall for Bee, simply because she can 'ride him with that surfboard....surfboard...surfboard' But anyway, I must say I feel so bad for Val. I mean, she's only 18, this must be her FIRST serious relationship, and he's fucking her over. This can only end badly, and if she's anything like me when she finds out she'll be fucked up.... mentally. I'm talking, everytime I see you I'm either gonna grab the nearest weapon, or break down crying, or I might do both. I don't even know, anything's possible with me.
Arghhhhh!! Why does Justin have to be a huge sliperry dick some times? I love how he answers his phone though, "Justin......This is he." I love when people answer phones like all down to business like that, I don't know why.
Anyway, Liv seems like the most innocent out of all of them, thinking the guy's on a business trip when he's acually fucking all three of your sisters. This'll definately lead to some swinging, even if they're the perfect sisters that love being there for eachother. *eye roll* I can so see this on an episode of 'The Maury Show'
I know for a fact, which ever one he chooses, All family gatherings would be awkward as fuck. How's he gonna present himself to their mom? "Hello Miss Knowles I'm the one that's in love with one of your daughters, but fucked the other three just for the hell of it." *Flashes that winning smile* I won't be surprised if someone calls him 'The family dick' ince he's been in all of them.
I feel sorry for all of them honestly, there really are guys like that in this world, (I was fathered by one). Which ever way you decide to swing, I'll be reading.
Yeah, I just left you a long ass review, so what?
Author's Response:Yes! It was a long and funny review. But I don't mind. I love to see what the readers think. I started this story a long time ago and didn't get to finish yet. It's been on hiatus and I don't know if it'll ever be finished. But it is a very fucked up situation to be in :(
Thanks for taking the time out to read and leave this long hilarious review! :D
he seems to really like bee but damn homey he needs to drop the rest. boy when they find out he may end up alone
Author's Response:It won't be nice, that's for sure. LOL. Thanks for reviewing!
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