I hope your making a sequal. I really liked this story. You shock me with the ending lol
Author's Response:I didn't plan on it but you never know. We'll see!
Glad you enjoyed it though :)
WoW!
Author's Response::O
Wow Bee's family is a piece of work.i can't believe she blames her for her fathers mistakes just crazy. Please update soon
Author's Response::( Yes I know. It's sad. First her father gone, now her mother. Along with her sister. I'll try to update when I can. Glad you enjoyed. Thanks!
great update, man beyonce has some f*ck up family.
Author's Response:I know. It's sad :(
Glad you enjoyed! Thank you
Wtf is wrong with her mother... why would she even defend her husband.. and say that bey shouldnt have said anything or reported him bc he APOLOGIZED. What a messsss. Anywayy thanks for the update once again!
Author's Response:And it's sad because there are ppl out there like that. They defend their spouses and put them before their own children smh.
Glad you enjoyed the update. Thanks for the review!
Tina is a bitch!I hate her and Matthew
Author's Response:Haha I know. :(
Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for the R&R
Wow.. Good chapter. I can't wait for the next one :D
Author's Response:Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed. Drama, drama, drama...lol
Thank you for the update. I hope Tina doesn't start trouble
Author's Response:You're welcome and there's more. Glad you enjoyed.
This was one of the stories I've first read when I found your website. I hope you update more bc I'll def look foward for it!
Author's Response:Aww thank you. I'm actually working on the next chapter. It's in progress so be on the look out! Thanks a bunch! :D
Ugh can her dad just be killed already.
Author's Response:Lmao I know. He's so disgusting.
A very touching emotional part of the story. You handled it wonderfully. Look forward to the rest of this story.
Author's Response:Really glad you're still interested because I wanna finish it and if I think no one is interested anymore, I tend to lose interest as well :/
I'll update when I can. Thank you!
Please update this one. I missed it, curious to what's gonna happen with them too.
Author's Response:I forgot about it and honestly I didn't think anyone was still interested. Not many ppl are that interested in the stories with Justin as a teenager. Don't know why but I enjoy reading and writing about him when he was younger.
I'll try to update when I can. Thanks a bunch!
I know this a story but i just blanked out in my mind on this fool. and Tina scared or not i would have killed this MF . Lord Jesus please get that baby some help. get her out of the situation. Whoo...jesus take the wheel. nice update
Author's Response:Lol I wanted to make it seem real as possible. And Tina is very stupid. They will eventually get all the help they need. So much going on. Any way, glad u enjoyed the update. Thx for reviewing
OMG!!!! Raped by her father I hope Justin don't snap
Author's Response:He's gonna snap. I'll try not to make it even worse than it already is. Thanks for reviewing.
Wow that was an intense update! But a great ! Her whole situation with her dad disturbes me well her dad disturbs me lol something definitely needs to be done with him
Author's Response:He will def get his. He's just a disgusting human being. Glad you still enjoyed it lol. Thx for the review.
oh noooo. her dad need to go to jail asap idek what her mom was thinking...smh
oh noooo. her dad need to go to jail asap idek what her mom was thinking...smh
Author's Response:I know. It's sad. But more is to come. Thank you for reviewing.
Oh my God can someone just kill Ashley add bee's dad already?!?! They've overstayed their welcome in this story by a longgggggggggg time.
Author's Response:Lol I agree! They will get theirs eventually. :) Glad you enjoyed it!
Ashley crazy as hell. she needs some help. lord someone help Beyonce before her father kills her. Tina you stupid as hell to let that man hurt your child like that. I hate to say it but Justin and Beyonce need to leave this time but don't stop for nothing head to LA or NYC. They need to get away from their parents.
Lynn's not listening and beyonce's parents are abusive.Lord help these kids.
Author's Response:Yes. They need help. And most of all, they need each other. More coming soon and thanks for reviewing!
Just started reading it. Very good story so far. Love the supense.
Author's Response:Thank you. I'm glad you like so far. :)
Well I'm glad they finally told someone hopefully that's the end of that. Especially since now this Ashley bitch has no leverage over them. I hope bee is okay when she gets home. Wishful thinking but I hope her dad isn't there, like her mum kicked him out or he just fucked off somewhere lol.
Author's Response:It's gonna be a problem for Bee. Having to deal with an abusive, alcoholic father :( Glad you enjoyed the update. More coming soon.
Well I'm glad that they know what happen now . So they can stop running and go home. Look forward to the next chapter to see what happens. Great update.
Author's Response:Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it!
Great update !
Author's Response:Thank you! :)
great update. they should just tell the truth. someone please do something to that ashley girl. i really don't like her at all. christina is bugging me too.
Author's Response:LOL yeah I know. The truth always comes to the light. We shall see how this plays out.
ugh ashley still annoys me like 'you'll learn to love me' stupid bitch HE DOESNT WANT YOU!! i really want them to tell someone so it can all just end but that would mean the story would end so maybe i dont want that....im so confusedddddd lol
Author's Response:LOL well I'm not quite ready to end it so it's going to linger on a bit. There's more drama coming though. Thanks for reviewing!
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