ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please kill ashley, pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
i think they should tell justin's mum, maybe as adults persepective can help them
Author's Response:HA-HA! Wow. Well there's a lot going to happen from here on out. LOL :)
well you had me with that ending ! lol
Great update :)
Author's Response:Thank you. I really appreciate it. More coming soon.
Uh oh what are these two up to! Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:LOL Thank you for the review. :)
LOVED THIS CHAPTER !
Author's Response:LOL thank you for reviewing! I really appreciate it. <3
Wow this is really getting exciting I think justin is going to lose it with all the drama/stress. Nice update!
Author's Response:Thanks a bunch. Yeah there's a lot happening right now and he can only deal with so much. More to come.
Great chapter!!!!
Author's Response:Thank you! :)
That ashley girl is kinda ticking me off she's like a...i don't know she's something. Good update very interesting :)
Author's Response:She's a bitch lol. Very persistent as well. Glad you enjoyed the update. Thanks!
Great chapter ; it wasn't too mature ! But ugh ashley is sooo annoying !
Author's Response:Yes she is! And thank you for reviewing!
Although I'm pissed I'm glad told bee cuz even though she's gonna be upset which is bad she's will know he truly loves her. I want you to kill Ashley; she can be run over, get shot, jump off a bridge or plank on the street; whatever you feel is best. Lool
I love how in every story I read of yours I want someone to die, but I like the drama as well. Update again when you can plz
Author's Response:Lmao ur funny. This will be a challenge for them. I'm still trying to figure out how I'm going to get rid of Ashley lol. Thanks for the review. Glad you enjoyed the update.
I thought I'd commented on this when you first updated but I guess it didn't work or whatever. But erm the moment between bee and justin was so sweet like awww bless him. Ugh this Ashley bitch is gonna piss me off, I just have an awful feeling she's gonna say be with me or I'll tell the police, I just hope he tells bee everything and doesn't try to 'protect' her
Author's Response:LOL yep. There is going to be more problems between the two. So be prepared lol. Thx for reviewing.
No who the fuck does this Ashley bitch think she is!!!!! They are so stupid for talking about in school though. I just have a horrible feeling she's gonna say break up with bee and be with her or she'll tell the police.
Author's Response:LOL it is a very fucked up situation to be in. A lot is going to happen, Mainly between Justin and Bee. All because of this girl. Thanks for reviewing!
You didn't offend me. i'm one that lives in reality so believe me i know the truth about teens. hell i was one.i will admit that i was sexually active as a teen with my boyfriend so when it came time for daughters to date i sat and talked with them open and honestly. i asked them both that when they felt they where ready for that step to talk to me so we can make sure that they are protected.They both said ok but that they had decided to wait. but back to your story great update. Tina mom had a right to be mad they where not suppose to question her with out parental permission or a lawyer present. til next time.
Author's Response:Yes till next time. Glad you're enjoying the story. Thx for the review!
I'm defo not offended like u said it happens and to be honest I wish they would just hurry up and have sex lool but on a serious note I really really wish it turns into a cold case and they leave it alone but then agai that would mean the story would end soon after and I don't want that so.....yeah just update again whenever u can plz :)
Author's Response:LOL okay. I'm glad to see you're not weirded out by the sexual encounters these two teens are having. I will update soon.
Noo they have finger prints?!?! Shit shit shittttt, I'm speechless I actually have no idea what to say, whether they should tell the truth since it was self defence or runaway. I just don't know
Author's Response:LOL well it will be getting more interesting as time goes on. Glad you enjoyed the update!
Arghhhh pleas let Christina be hit by a bus she is pissing me off!!! Omg solange knows?! Shit I hope and pray she wot say anything. Oh wow bee is a freak!! I wonder if Justin actually knows what to do. Thats gonna be interesting. Lol
Author's Response:He has know clue lol. Won't say too much. Only to look out for the next update and thanks for reviewing!
I wonder what's going on or happen??
OMG when his Mom caught him. I remeber visiting my cousin and his mom caught him . I don't know who screamed the loudest him or her. lol He was so embarassed and then she wanted to have the sex talk. lol. He couldn't look at her in the face for awhile. lol. he still embarassed by that event. Great update.
Author's Response:Thank you! Appreciate the review. Yeah, I can't imagine how embarrassing that is.
Bwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha he was dreaming?!?! Oh God I can't stop laughing and then his mum caught him masturbating! Aww they're really cute once again and if I was to believe Christina that she didn't tell I reckon it was Britney. Butttt I don't. Lool
Author's Response:LMAO yeah I know. I was thinking really hard about whether I should make it a dream or reality. But then I thought it would be too soon for them to be having sex lol. Thanks for the review!
Christina is so jealous, but maybe it could have been Johnathan or even Britney. Who knows??? The story is getting really good. Upate again soon...
Author's Response:Lol Thank you. Will update soon!
hmm could it be Brit. i'm hinking tina. we shall see
Author's Response:Till the next update! Well I'm not sure if you will find out then but you know what I mean lol.
I knew she'd be talking bout the sex thing. What if it was Britney who said something?! I highly doubt it but still
Author's Response:It does have you guessing, huh? LOL
Omg i love this story.
Author's Response:Thank you. I'm glad you like it.
Uh oh... I'm scared for them!
Author's Response:Thanks for the review! Till next time.
I feel like I'm gonna say this every update lol but awww bee and Justin are soo cute and Christina still needs to jump off that bridge!! Oh no his mum was listening?!?! Holy shit, that is not good but hopefully she only talks to him about them talking about sex. Fingers crossed!
Author's Response:I won't say anything but thanks for the review! :)
Christina needs to get over her jealousy. Justin and Beyonce are so cute as a couple...lol
Author's Response:LOL I know. Thank you!
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