I love this story, but hated to see the ending. I would love to see more revolve around this story.
Author's Response:There is a lot of unfinished business with them, huh? I'm not sure yet whether I should make a sequel. Thinking about it though.
Aww loved this story so much
Author's Response:Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing!
Finally the truth is out, let's hope after he catches the dude he goes to see her again
Oh so he's a detective, okay okay cool. Please leave a note before you leave Justin :(
Argh what is he hiding!! They both need to just tell each other the truth
So he's lying too!! Who are you really Justin??
Uh oh bee took his advise all right but what's gonna happen in the morning
Author's Response:LOL you will see! :)
:,( its over oh well it was a nice :)
Author's Response:Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I know it was short! LOL
Noooooo it's over :( But I really enjoyed this ..hope there is a sequel ;)
Author's Response:Thinking about it. Not too sure yet. Glad you enjoyed the story! :)
They both lied to each other and I glad that they told each other the truth. I love this story and can't wait to read what happens next...
Author's Response:Thanks for your review. One more chapter is posted. Hope you enjoy!
omg! this makes me wanna cry too :) ....gosh hope they can be together.
Author's Response:LOL glad you're enjoying it so far. It's a really short story though :(
Aww these two make me wanna cry. Reading other stories and seeing things on the news, I totally get why Justin wants to distance himself from Bee, while at the same time Bee is going off of her emotions and not trying to listen to reason. I hope things will turn around but we all know there is going to be an amazing twist to this story. Love it!!! Can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response:Thank you for your review. The story is finished though. It was very short but it does leave you wondering what happens next. :)
Wow I didn't see that coming. Its really exciting I can't wait for chapter 7!!
Author's Response:Thank u. I'm glad ur enjoying it so far. There's only 2 more chapters of this story lol. Thx for the review
I absolutely love the twist of this story, the fact that they are both lying to each other. I love it!!!!!
Author's Response:Lol thank u! Appreciate ur review!
They both are lying about who they are. I like this story. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:Glad u like! More coming soon!
Damn what is going on with Justin??? They both are keeping secrets.
Author's Response:You will find out soon. This story isn't going to be long like the others. Just a mini novel. Thx for the reviews!
I hope that he face his problems and I hope Beyonce tells the truth.
Author's Response:Not yet. Maybe soon though.
I knew that was going to happen.
Author's Response:LOL They're both predictable :))
Gosh im really confused what could he do that lies and maniplates people but still win a medal for it and i feel so bad for Bee !
Author's Response:LOL You will find out soon. This story won't be long. Just like a short, mini type of novel. Glad you're enjoying so far!
oh snap who the hell is Justin and what did he win a medal in or for. hmmm??? Nice update. Thxs.
Author's Response:You will find out soon! LOL And THANK YOU for reviewing!
Uh oh ...Justin's not really who he says he is!?!?.. Girl you definitely have me hooked with all your stories!!
Author's Response:LOL Thank you. Appreciate your review. Yeah the story should be getting very interesting :)
Hot Damn. Beyonce about to get her back blown out. HAHA. Especially with Justin not having none in a while. i hope she can walk the next day. lol. I Like this story hope you update it more. What the hell i like all you stories...sooooo...update them all. lol. thxs for sharing your talent with us.*Back to the books.*
Author's Response:LOL You're too kind. I'm glad you enjoyed the update. Thanks for the review! More soon!
Update please.
Author's Response:I'll try to update tomorrow. I have so many stories I'm working on all at once. Kinda hard to keep track lol.
I'm liking this but all hell is gonna break lose once he finds out the truth, bee should just tell him now.
Author's Response:It won't be interesting if she tells him now lol. I'm gonna draw out the situation a bit longer :))
I think Justin finds bee questionable but intriguing and Bee is doing good so far !
Author's Response:Lol me too. Thanks for the review!
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