Bey needs to get some confidence. I hope justin will get her out of this bad relationship. Thanks for updating
Author's Response:It's sad :( But hopefully things will work out. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
OMG! I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response::D Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed part 4. Part 5 hopefully coming soon lol
Thanks for the update it was lovely
Author's Response:You're very welcome. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Loved it. Beyonce get a restraining order and press charges against that ass. Easy said than done i know. Think about your future sweetie. Next time don't open the door call the police. Justin you making major promises hope you hold up to them.look forward to pt.5. now that i have finally moved and got internet back i can review more. great chapter.
Author's Response:LOL thank you so much. I was so tied up with the other stories, I completely pushed this one aside. It was on hiatus for over a year :( I'll try to post part 5 before the year is over with lol.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Glad you enjoyed the update!
I am going through all of your stories to catch up and I really want you to come back and finish this one up. Come back with the next chapter of their saga.
Author's Response:I'll try. It's nice to know you're still interested and haven't forgotten about the story. I promise I'll try to add more as soon as I can :)
Thanks so much!
Hey I haven't been here in awhile but I hope that you come back to finish up the part four so we can see how Justin makes it up to Bee!!!!
Author's Response:Hey! Haven't seen you on in awhile. How's everything? To be honest with you, I completely forgot about this story lol. I have so many in progress, it's hard to keep track.
I will probably have part four up this year sometime. Don't know when though. But keep stopping by!
Nice to hear from you again!
Please add to this series soon. The conversation in this chapter was deep and understandably necessary. Because I am also from the south like Justin and Bey, I can definitely related to alot of the concerns and issues that Bey was trying to get answers to from Justin, as to WHY he really kept her around.
As a matter of fact, it was very fitting considering the way things seemed to have been downplayed so much between the two of them by the public and Hollywood media. I truly get confused by that, because their are other interacial couples in Hollywood, so I can't help but to wonder why do Justin and Bey keep getting tugged apart in that atmosphere. The ironic thing is that regardless of all of the obstacles and sabatoge attempts, their love story continues to be phenomenal, so much that it has touched others (like me) through their music.
I can't wait to read part four and I hope that it has multiple chapters to it. Thank you!
Author's Response:Yes it's supposed to have multiple parts. I didn't make it a novel because I didn't think the story would end up long enough for a novel. So I separated them into parts. I don't have part 4 in the works yet but I will definitely add more to this when I get a chance. When I figure out where I'm going with it.
But I'm glad you enjoyed it so far. They really do belong together. :)
Thanks a bunch.
My god I love this story and the way that you laid it out. I am still thinking about the last chapter when the guy told her to enjjoy what time she had left with them or something like that, why though?? Can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response:Thank you. Glad you're still interested. It will be explained about the guy later. Thanks for reviewing.
great update !
Author's Response:Thank you! :)
Re read it again. Still love it waiting patiently for part 3
Author's Response:Lol thank you. I promise there will be a pt 3. Maybe soon
I can't wait to read the next chapter and Justin needs to beg for how he treated her.
Author's Response:He does. She won't make it easy. Trust me. LOL
Its good how Bee takes care of both kids and when isla called her mommy.... lol . He seems like he has truely changed but he needs to go over the top for her to even think about "them". Great update though and it would be nice if Bee sorta dates someone, make him feel what she felt but without envious intention on her part. Anyway what did that guy mean, 'enjoy it while it lasts' ?
Author's Response:There's a lot they're gonna have to go through before she even considers being with him. And the stranger at the end was just some random guy who was there with his children going through problems with his wife. I didn't go into detail with that because he wasn't important to the story. :) Glad you enjoyed the update.
He is going to need to work really really hard to get with beyonce. And I hope Britney doesn't punish Isla for Justin's stupidity and dumb ways.
Author's Response:LOL well it will be an emotional rollercoaster for everyone involved. Thx for the review!
Love the update look forward to more soon. Justin is will be working hard to get Beyonce back. I hope that was not a sign of bad tings to come but i know with you it will all work out.
Author's Response:He's just gonna have to work hard lol. Glad you enjoyed the update.
Good well done bee, fuck him although I am not happy she poked a hole in the condom, that's some crazy shit. Can't wait for Britney to find out.
Author's Response:Yep. More to come soon! :)
I hope bee gives him a hard time and doesn't forgive him straight away, he cant waltz in 4 years later and expect everything to be good. Idiot. But atleast he came back I guess
Author's Response:That's men for ya lol. Thx for the review
Don't think I've read the first part to this :/ and if I have I don't remember. Looks like I'm gonna have to read it. But I'm defo by complaining lol :)
Update Soon!!!!!!
Update Soon!!!!!!
I love this story. I'm glad that you made a sequel to it. Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:Thank you! Appreciate your review!
Wow thxs girl. I didn't expect a sequel so soon but i'm not complaining. Great chapter look forward to more . I'm going to reread.
Author's Response:You're welcome. Me neither. After I read your review, I thought about it and since I was in the writing mood, I went ahead and started doing my thang lol. Appreciate your review. Glad you enjoyed it.
I was wondering if there was ever going to be more parts to this..glad you did..once again I'm hooked!! Can't wait for the next part.
Author's Response:It originally wasn't supposed to be another part but I've been asked to write a second part so I did. I did kind of leave the first part on a cliff hanger lol. Glad you enjoyed it! :)
GREAT UPDATE ! i loved it, and gosh Bee is in a really hard situation i mean he did leave her pregnant and shows up years later, it's just hard to wrap your mind around.
Author's Response:Yep. Can't let her forgive him that easily lol. Thx for the review!
Shona can we possibly get a sequel to this. i would like to see how he made up for the 4years he was awol and iwould like to see people reaction to the fact he had a son he knew about and took 4 years to pick up his responsbilities(?). Something tells me his mom would be in his but. thxs for the great story
Author's Response:I would love to do a second part! I will try to when I get a chance and as well as The Duet. I'll try not to forget lol. Thank you!
wow. The ending would make a great beginnig to a sequel. I would love to see how he made peace and things right with B and Cory.Because 4 yrs is alot of time to atone for. I like to think he had a P.I follow them from time to time and he had pictures of them through the years.
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