Love it all
Noooo! This is my favorite story! It can't be over! :'(
Author's Response:I'm sorry. I know it was sudden. I don't know. Maybe a sequel...
Maybe a second addition where she's strictly counseling. I'll think about it. But I'm glad you enjoyed it.
😢 ahh that was a good ending. And I don't wanna seem like I'm pushing it or being rude but it kinda feels like it ended abruptly? Like maybe you couldn't think of anything else to add to it. But that's just me. If this is where you intended to end it then just ignore this whole paragraph and read the first sentence 😋 lol
Author's Response:LOL you're right. There wasn't much to add to the story. I actually thought about ending it at the last minute. When I started writing the chapter, that wasn't my intentions but I didn't think there was more to it. They were happy and Bee accepted his proposal. AND she overcame her fears and started counseling again. :)
Sorry to end it so sudden but I'm glad you enjoyed it.
LOved it and hate to see it end. This was a nice story.
Author's Response:Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was even sudden for me but there wasn't much left to go on.
Aww I can't believe its over. Good story very good job. Glad they have got rid of there issues.
Author's Response:I know it was sudden but I didn't think there was more to it. She let her guard down and accepted his proposal...
Glad you enjoyed. Thanks so much!
Yayyyy they're married, Marla is jealous, but who cares....stay mad Marla, stay mad! Nobody caresssssss lol
Author's Response:Lmao I know. Nobody cares lol.
Marla is becoming suspect to me. I don't think there is a boyfriend. I think she did this to make Justin jealous. hmmm. I think she wanted Justin to try and get her back. But then Beyoncé entered the pic and he is about to ask her to marry him. She is pissed I bet. great update.
Author's Response:LOL she's crazy and desperate and needs to get a clue. Glad you enjoyed and thanks for ur review!
Ugh Marla is annoying! Justin and bee are too cute
Author's Response:LOL tell me about it. And they are cute together! :)
Yay! I miss this so much and I hope that Justin will propose and that Bey can stop being so scared.
Author's Response:I know. They're so good for each other. :D Thanks for reviewing!
Just started reading this. One of my fave stories from you.
Author's Response:Thanks girl. It's taking a while to finish since I have a ton of other stories I'm working on. Hope you like it! :)
Awwwww such a beautiful update. Marla needs to go somewhere you left him! Now stay in your place. Poor bee, she'll get over it with time
Author's Response:Yes I know. Something like that will take some time to get over. She keeps thinking about the possibilities, like what could've happened to her and all. Glad you liked the update. Thanks for reviewing!
I loved this moment between them. He is slowly breaking down her walls. Hopefully she can go back to work soon. Oh and Justin is proving to her that he is there to stay. But as I known with one of my favorite fan fiction writers there will be DRAMA. Love ya girl keep doing what you do.
Author's Response:I appreciate ur review. As for the drama, maybe there will be a story without it someday. But that would be too boring, huh? Lol. Thanks for the review.
Once again a beautiful update but I know drama will come soon. But will it be from bee's commitment issues or another man/woman. Hmmmnm
Author's Response:Hmmm we don't know yet. Glad you enjoyed the update.
Ah loved this update, nice and sweet :)
Author's Response:Thank you! :)
I wish she'd give him a chance, this Abbie chick needs to disappear although she hasn't done anything yet, I can tell she's a creeper! Lol
Author's Response:Lol maybe. And yes, Bee is being stubborn.
That was a great chapter! She's finally opening up....okay I'm sure some drama is coming so bring it on. But it could be HEA for them....you always keep us guessing .....update again soon!
Author's Response:I will. Thank you and glad you enjoyed the update!
I wish she would give Justin a chance. He seems really in live with her. Maybe it will get better .....on to the next one...
Author's Response:Maybe it will...lol
Love it. Great update.
Author's Response:Thank you! :D
I really enjoyed this story. I think they are a cute couple and I hope she lets her guard down and let him in be free...I can relate to Bee completely. Trusting someone isn't easy to do when you been hurt. Can't wait for the next update
Author's Response:Exactly. It's really hard to trust. Eventually she will get there. Thank you for reviewing.
Nice update. Love the interaction with these two. Til next update
Author's Response:Thank you. I'm trying to make it less drama lol.
Love this ! I'm glad she's getting over her hurdles a d starting to let him in but I hope him telling her that doesn't stop them from moving coward in their relationship!! And that Abbie chick needs to take a hint and disappear. I hope they have a kid too 😝
Author's Response:LOL thank you. I hope so too. We will see. :)
Yayyy she said she loved him <3 I'm glad she's getting along with the family.
Author's Response:Yes! That's a good thing! :)
Aww Justin is soo good for bee. I'm not even gonna address the marla situation cuz right now she's irrelevant and I hope it stays that way
Author's Response:Lol u never know. Thanks for the review!
Thank you...thank you for this update. This couple is just perfect but I'm waiting on the office nut to crack once she finds out about Justin taking Bee to meet the parents. I'm doing my happy dance about the update though.
Author's Response:Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the update. I wasn't sure whether a lot of ppl liked this story but now I know lol. More coming soon!
I love that Bee took the time to open up to Justin about how she feels, I just hope that Justin does not, I repeat does not pop the question cause that will run her away. Can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response:LOL thanks for your review. More coming soon!
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