Yay another finished story. But I agree it was at its end. Enjoyed it greatly. Til next time...Happy writing.
Author's Response:Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
Oh my goodness, now something is wrong with her. I hope Justin makes her fight to find a cure to whatever it is!!!
Author's Response:It's going to be hard and very emotional. Thanks for reviewing.
Hmmm, I wonder what the rumore is. Also for some reason I believe that Cynthis ias actually accepting this situation and moving on but Justin will never believe her. Can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response:Things are never what they seem. That's all I can say lol. Thanks for reviewing.
I am so glad that Artemis is finally standing up for herself but we all know how this works, beacause Artemis never told anyone, this wouldn't look like self defense and how much do you want to bet that Jordan will go say something so that Artemis is kicked out. I hope that she reaches out to Justin. Can't wait for more!!!
poor Artimiss at least she protected herself. these girls need to give it up. Justin don't want their friend. God they need their ass beat. Glad to see a chapter of this story .thxs for the update.
I (we all know) that Justin cares for her but because of the way that she looks and because of her status, I feel that girls atr going to be trying their hardest to get Justin to even look their way. I feel that if they go the party, something is going to happen that Artemis may tak the wrong way and she's gonna end it but I would love to see how Justin is going to try to get her back. Can't wait for more!!!
Justin sure told Cynthia off!
Cynthia really has some nerve to keep trying this out over and over. What the hell is Sandra doing as well, you never asked her anything about herself or protected her before but now that she's with Justin, you want to know everything about her (well him really, maybe she wants Justin???). Can't wait for more!!!
Aww these two are so sweet but I totally get the fact that Artemis feels like what they have going on is a little short lived but I hope that Justin doesn't intentionally hurt her. Can't wait for more!!!
As sweet as this chapter may be, all I thought in my head at the end of this was in all the stories that I read a couple gets to this point where someone loses their virginity and then the disgruntled ex comes by and screws everyting up, so I can't wait until you write more so I can see what's up!!!
Wow I was suprised to see that I had not commented on this chapter but I am so suprised by Cynthia. Would they have not put two and two together and come to her eventually about it but for her to try and harass her in the dorm. Idiot but based on the way that Artemis has been acting as to where she doesn't tell him when someone messes with her, Cynthia would have succeded so who knows.
They are too cute. Why in the heavens wouldn't Cynthia think that her wasn't serious about Artemis. She saw it already with her own eyes that he was interested so why didn't she believe it. I know that she is going to remain a problem!!!!
Artemis is making me mad, if Sandra just told her that no one messes with Justin's girl why is she saying oh no, like the pressure is going to build up one day and everyone is just going to beat the crap out of her??? If they are already leaving you alone and no one messes with Justin's girl, why would they start when they make it official??
Aww poor girl, I hope that she would be able to believe him and that Cynthia will keep to herself. Can;t wait for more!!!
Seriously Cynthia is getting on my nerves, we can see that he is not outwardly putting any vibes toward Artemis but Cynthia is pissed. I really hope that she does nothing to Artemis but we all know that she is going to. Can't wait for more!!!
artimis needs to crack open a can of whip ass on them. i liked the update. hopefully more soon.
Oh my god seriously. I just don't get it, this has nothing to say to no one but they continously harass her, makes no sense. Great chapter!!!
i love b and j but i like this story too.. so bring it on.Hope Artimis gets a backbone soon and start standing up for her self.
I love this. He is so right, she is so concerned about Artemis that she isn't even worried about Justin and his grades. Just like he said at the beginning, he dated her because she is pretty and popular. Even though this is a story, I can't believe the cattiness at a college of all places. Can't wait for more!!!
So what is Cynthia going to do now, threaten her even more now. I can't wait for more!!!
Like your story but Cyntihia and her friends are so immature for college age students. They still act like they are in high school.
I really wish that Artemis would just tell Justin and why can't Justin notice the way that people treat her and maybe try to help her with that before he thinks she can just trust him?
Great start! Cynthia and her sidekick need to go. I hope Sandra sticks up for artimis
Cant wait for more
I understand that Cynthia is a dumb as they get and can not put two and two together but didn't she notice when Justin told her that she said no to his question so why in the world would she need to come and try to either intimidate her more or beat her up if she brought her croonie. I feel bad for her, I hope that Sandra at least tries to help her if something goes down and if it does, that Artemis speaks up and tell Justin. I really hope. Can't wait for more!!!!
this looks interesting.update soon.
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